Reviews for When Walls Fall
DiamondWhiskeyGirl chapter 7 . 7/19/2007
I want to tell you what a wonderful job you are doing. I was looking for this one, especially after finding the rest of this series. This is the first time I've reviewed anything in a while. I was impressed by the way you represented the guys and I love the fact you have the ladies unafraid to stand up to them. Keep up the great work and I'm looking forward to more of the adventures of Finn and Dave.
Takerslady chapter 7 . 7/19/2007
Exactly how much money did Finn make? Dave is gon abe SO pissed. Great chapter, update soon. :)
Takerslady chapter 6 . 7/19/2007
Great chapter. At least they finally got Melina.
Jen105 chapter 6 . 7/19/2007
Loving this story. Now you've brought John in on it. Are you going to possibly write a story on him? I'd love to read it if you do.

Jen
tkc12 chapter 7 . 7/19/2007
great chapter! please update soon!
Ginger James chapter 7 . 7/19/2007
Kevin yelling Sweet Chin Music cracked me up. Another great chapter, I was scared for Finn to fight but I'm glad she won. I'm eager to see how Dave will react, I cant see him being too pleased
Ginger James chapter 6 . 7/19/2007
John needs a woman and, because I am a selfless person, I will volunteer myself. All jokes aside, I'm glad Finn hit Melina and I love that Mark was willing to take up for her. And Finn finally opening up to Dave was great, they're really shaping up to be a great couple
Alissa5 chapter 6 . 7/19/2007
Do I smell a John Cena story next? Great Chapters!
Sharnhorst chapter 7 . 7/19/2007
Playing cards with that bunch sounds like huge fun, I sure wouldn't mind being at that table. Finn has the ability to knock the wind out of Dave just when he's about to shout, but I have a feeling that isn't going to last long once Mark tells him about the fight!
Sharnhorst chapter 6 . 7/19/2007
I think it's SO funny the way Finn is disgusted with herself for having feelings and acting like a girl! Hahaha! So good. And yeah, I'd be staring at his chest too...for about 2 seconds before I was all over him like a rash! lol
aphotshot chapter 7 . 7/19/2007
i can't wait to find out how dave reacts...please continue
aphotshot chapter 6 . 7/19/2007
i can't wait to find out how dave will react when he finds out about finn fighting
sizzlin' diva chapter 5 . 7/18/2007
yay finn! she held her temper. and i think that dave is smitten. keep posting and good work.
Perfect Imperfections chapter 5 . 7/17/2007
great chapter. I can't wait to see what finn looks like after they take her shopping. Dave and her are so cute together. I can't wait for them to become a couple officially. Great work. Your always so consistent in the quality of your writing. C U in the next chapter.
Sandra Moore7474 chapter 5 . 7/17/2007
oh wow that was a great chapter update soon
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