Reviews for DESERTED
Broken-Midnight chapter 9 . 2/12/2009
When are you going to make the next one? plzs hurry they are very good i think anywayz :D
cast14 chapter 9 . 12/1/2008
great story i loved it

InARealPickle chapter 9 . 10/13/2008
If Ino was far enough along to feel her baby kick, then it would have been obvious to Sakura that Ino was pregnant just by looking at her. The whole kicking thing doesn't start until around 5/6 months. By then, the bulge is obvious.

Also, what is Kakashi doing there? Why wasn't Sakura and Genma surprised to see him? They left him back in Konoha just a day before. He's supposed to be back home watching her house and watering her plants. She gave him her friggin' house keys!
InARealPickle chapter 8 . 10/13/2008
and she's crying again
InARealPickle chapter 7 . 10/13/2008
Sakura putting the prick through two tables was the best thing you've written so far. Way to give Sakura some balls! Can't be ANBU without being hardazz.
InARealPickle chapter 6 . 10/13/2008
Will Sakura ever stop her weak azz crying?

She's a shinobi.

So was Sasuke.

Shinobi die.

Get over it already.

Or at least pretend to get over it and stop showing your emotional weakness to everyone.
InARealPickle chapter 5 . 10/13/2008
So... clarify something for me. Is Sakura living in an apartment building or in the old Uchiha estate? You kept talking about both.
InARealPickle chapter 3 . 10/13/2008
My suggestion is to pick either English titles or Japanese honorifics. Using both is kind of annoying.
InARealPickle chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
wasabi-senpai chapter 9 . 10/13/2008
love your story and hope you'll update soon...I really wanna know what happens next ;-)
cast14 chapter 8 . 5/24/2008
great story i loved it


can't wait to find out what will happen next time
monodie chapter 8 . 5/1/2008
i like it!

please keep it up and update soon! :D
MissAX chapter 8 . 4/13/2008
totally cute

oni-hime-san chapter 8 . 4/13/2008 sso adorible...- how cute! luv it
animefan28 chapter 8 . 4/13/2008
I dont like the genma sakura ness of this chapter but i hope sakura feels better about losing sasuke soon she should be happy! :)
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