|Reviews for A Lovely Afternoon|
| lynxlan chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
I remember reading this once before but I wasn't signed in to review then. It is a well written sweet story. I can picture the younger versions of the characters behaving just like that. :)
| Romen chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
That was so cute! Very sweet first kiss :)
| ibelieveintruelove chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
Oh that was adorable! I love that they were each other's first kiss and that they are both just beginning to realize that they fancy each other. Excellent story!
| Aquamarine07 chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
Aw! That was really cute! I loved how you ended it with "Elizabeth Swann was beginning to fancy William Turner".
| OceanFae chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
that was weird. this story just made me giggle like an insane schoolgirl while saying "aw!". wow.
| Krism chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
that was too adorable Mel! I love pre-cotbp fics! Really really sweet and fluffy! Thanks so much!
| teenelizabeth chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
For a first attempt at writing, this was an absolutely lovely piece. Even my boyfriend liked it, and if you knew him, you'd know that's quite the compliment. ) Keep writing!
| Alex - obsessive pirate lover chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
Ah! How sweet! This is quite a well written fanfiction. I absolutely love the conversation between the two, it was done perfectly. I was smiling the entire time I was reading it! :) It left me feeling all warm and fuzzy. Haha. Keep up the fantastic work, I hope to see more Willabeth OneShots like this one. :)
| williz chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
How did I not come to see this before?
I absolutely LOVED it. And they were both so in character. Elizabeth taunting and feeding off of poor Will's embarrassment, and Will blushing like a bloody tomato, innit!
Love it well, mate. Love it well.
| a muggle named Caity chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
Oh my God. That was too cute! This is one of my new favorite stories. Thanks a million for writing it!
| The Enchanted Teakettle chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
Great fic; it was so sweet! The characterizations were really good! I liked Will's nerves and Elizabeth's boldness. The ending was nice, like an echo of the beginning.
Well done! :)
| Pistachio Rules chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
how cute .
| The Wishmeister chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
wonderfull story. very realistic. you should write a long one about will and liz growing up together
| VenusRising chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
| astral symphony chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
Aw, this was simply adorable. :)
Will's such a sweetheart. -giggle-