Reviews for Souvenirs
Vamp97 chapter 7 . 4/3/2011
Wow that last one was funny

u could make a story out of that
xchirix chapter 7 . 8/27/2009
HAHAHAA! Can't believe that the woman was Lee's Mom. Hahahahihihh! Update soon! Please and thank you!

:D
12219198115209 chapter 3 . 11/15/2008
Woah! That's one thing that'd be freaking awesome and funny to watch! Sasuke's reaction, eh? LOL...
12219198115209 chapter 2 . 11/15/2008
WAH! FLUFFY-NESS! :D I really like this! I rarely read oneshots unless I feel extremely lazy, but this is great! I'd read it anytime! :D
OSYH chapter 7 . 9/7/2008
BAHAHAHA that was a hilarious twist! And I bet you were foreshadowing that Yoshe was Lee's mom when you first described her. Very nice ;D
Xanie chapter 4 . 9/6/2008
...Another reason other than to ask her out?
SnowCharms chapter 7 . 7/22/2008
I'm gonna laugh and laugh till I drop...seriously...how is it possible for such a beautiful woman to have such a weirdo as a son I really wonder...I'm so betting that Yoshe doesn't really mean beautiful...update!
Tallis-chan chapter 7 . 7/14/2008
Hahahahahahaha! Wow... that totally made me laugh for a good five minutes! That was so funny! But poor Neji! Haha. I love!
I-Heart-Hatake-Kakashi chapter 7 . 7/9/2008
aw... thanks. XD

an OOC Neji... can't wait... :)

hahaha... wow... it just so reads as if you've been wanting to do this Neji Gai convo... lol... but in a GOOD way... I like it... I always love he insightful/fatherly/still-utterly-Gai insanity... lol... he's fun that way XP...

oh... and I got to say... LOVED the whole Neji going to see if Tenten wasn't faking... hehehe... oh, poor Tenten's-Door... it never did nothing to no one, but it's always getting broken down. XP

"’No!’ he mentally chided himself, ‘Stop thinking about her!’"... hahah... he knows he loves her!

"‘Now, wouldn’t it shut Gai up…’ the prodigy mused silently, ‘if I’d be seen with that woman…?’" *GASP*... omg... what Neji planning?...

YOSHE... OMG, OMG, OMG, OMG... OMG!... omg, Neji's flirting with Lee's mom! OMG!... hahahaha... I am SO Glad I didn't start reading this in class... it would have been SO bad... omg!

"’She knows me. This will make it even easier for me.’" omg... what a little... hahaha...

"“You do know that your name means “beautiful one”, don’t you?”... “It suits you quite well.”" omg... he's flirting!

"“She is my girlfriend.”" ... OMG!... oh, this is so not good... (definitely a good thing I didn't read this in class)... omg... I feel so embarrassed for Neji already... and nothing has happened yet... omg...

does Gai know? I wonder... ... omg...

Gai makes them sing?... oh i'd pay to see that... lol

"she’s my student’s ‘special someone’" ...omg... lol... he knows!... hehehe... omg... (how many is that? 16 omgs... 17)

aha... "mom"... wow... that HAD to hurt... heheh...

"Loudly, the spandex-wearing youth yelled one word that made Neji want to die on the spot." hahaha... so funny...

that could have been worst for Neji... he's lucky Gai's not that mean... omg... wow...

lol... I laughed like crazy during this fic... thanks so much for writing it, and for dedicating it to me... aw... thanks... XD... omg... lol...
Shadeehue chapter 5 . 4/15/2008
Just read all your chapters out of order and was too lazy to review each one but they're good I loved Chapter 4 and 6, especially 6 hehe. Chapter 5 was sad ( But good writing keep it up!
Xanie chapter 3 . 2/5/2008
This is HILARIOUS! Mind making another one?
Maka-chan12 chapter 6 . 1/26/2008
that was fucking funny.
Maka-chan12 chapter 5 . 1/26/2008
That was very mean of Hiashi.
What About Today chapter 6 . 1/24/2008
oh, that's mean. I love it! Tenten should get a dog! It would be so useful! lol Great work.
I-Heart-Hatake-Kakashi chapter 6 . 1/22/2008
omg, that was priceless! lol

okay, first off, thanks for the dedication. XD

second... so funny. Captured Neji perfectly. I love the whole Kiba set up (lol... "Stupid Mutt"... XD)... I kind of expected Kiba to have been the one to have given the puppy to Tenten, but then if you'd included that, you would have had to write something about Neji and Kiba... so I think it worked out better this way... it didn't distract from the main purpose of the story.

Oh yeah, before I forget, there's 1 inconsistency in the puupy's gender. At one point you called it a "he"... something like "wagging HIS tail gleefully"... but everywhere else it was a girl dog...

Hiashi appearing out of nowhere was a little random... don't get me wrong, totally funny... especially the "frolicking with that thing"... I can just imagine Hiashi going back to the compound and telling everyone what he saw Neji doing... lol...

Tenten on the tree... prefect... lol... and the fangirls adoring and giggling at him was so funny.

And I've got to say, I was laughing my butt off when I read the sign!lol

awesome job!
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