Reviews for Fireworks of Eternity
eenayde chapter 2 . 2/11/2014
Another chapter! Plz make another chapter!
Guest chapter 2 . 1/27/2014
i love it
Guest chapter 2 . 6/6/2013
Well, I got here from DA and now I have an actual OTP in Naruto. Pretty. Damn. Awesome. Fic. X3
a random sadist chapter 2 . 4/24/2013
This is hot *nosebleed*
Vidalli Galaxy chapter 2 . 12/20/2012
Gamergirl224 chapter 2 . 12/9/2012
Damn that punishment was HOT! X3
Love your work. :3
Guest chapter 2 . 7/11/2012
i love it so awesome
mattisadams chapter 2 . 7/9/2012
This is the best thing EVER! I love it! Good Job!
The critic chapter 2 . 6/12/2012
This was a very well written story, honestly, I loved it.I read it every day since I found it and I still read it today. The story had very good detail and I repeat my first statement, very well written, and it was very descriptive. and Unlike some other stories I have read on this site it had a warning for Yaoi. For very young readers this story would most definitely puzzle them but for the older more mature readers this produces a very descriptive imagery. It in all was very enjoyable to read and at part in the first chapter, had humor. Like when the author said: "“Danna?” he called out. He ran after Sasori, concerned, to find him over the sink, trying to stop a nosebleed that tried to imitate the ferociousness of the Niagara Falls." I can see how the image looks, finding a puppet that was leaning over the sink trying to stop a nosebleed that was like the Niagara falls. but then the author turned and hit with a double punch the line:"“Um, Danna? Why are you having such a massive nosebleed, un? Were you looking at porn magazines again?” Deidara asked cautiously, leaning against the doorway." When Deidara had asked Sasori if he was reading Porn maganizes I would of suspected Sasori to respond with the line "No, you idiot!" That was predictable of sasori but when he said" It's you and the way you eat that goddamn dango!" I would have suspected he say something along the lines of "Now leave me alone"

This story really left me with a want to read more from the author, However If they made me write a report on this, I wouldn't be able to as I wouldn't be able to describe how it is. So in all, if I was a food critic and I had to rate a restaurant oh which was the story I would give it five five stars in all. All the five stars being, Humor, Well written, left the reader pleased and excited. along with sticking to some of the natural characters personality, and having the best imagery I've every read. and I've read many things. So I give this critique to the author of Denial and Fireworks of eternity, and hope that they think that Christmas has come early this year.


The critic
Firestar2200 chapter 2 . 4/9/2012
... In times like this, where it's so hard to explain how epic your story was, we go to the word that describes it all; SSEEXXYY. I loved the story! Its one of my favorites!
fricken ray of sunshine chapter 2 . 6/23/2011

F4ng chapter 2 . 5/7/2011
DeeaE chapter 2 . 4/13/2011
love ittttttttttttt
DeidaraUlquiorra chapter 2 . 3/24/2011
MAN , I LOVED IT ! AWESOME LEMON ~ ! *fangirl screams* XDD *clicks subscribe to author* hope to see more lemons of SasoDei from ya *wriggles eyebrows*
DeidaraUlquiorra chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
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