|Reviews for katie's story|
| McKinnon-and-Black-forever chapter 9 . 8/1/2013
I love your story! I feel really bad for Fred though he obviously likes Katie but she is too stubborn to see it. Please write more!
| RomanaLadyPresidentOfGallifrey chapter 9 . 7/30/2010
is fred using that tilley person? is katie jelous of tilley? is fred jelous of cedric?
| xXAMBERXx chapter 9 . 6/20/2009
this is so sweet! SORRY lack of sleep makes me type weird things! one question, is Fred using Tilley?
plz update soon!
| Ready Fredie chapter 9 . 4/23/2009
OMG! I hate cliff hangers. but thats ok because this is a REALLY great story. Update really really really soon!
| TheRugMaster chapter 9 . 10/20/2008
This is great, please update. Hey a poem!
| harrypotternerdgirl chapter 9 . 8/19/2008
UPDATE! pretty please. ]
| Europe28 chapter 9 . 3/28/2008
I wish people would write more Fred/Katie fanficts
| Galantria chapter 9 . 2/28/2008
You realy need to update. PLEASE? I want to know what happened!
| ALlisonWonderland1232 chapter 9 . 2/14/2008
Oh cliffhanger! I cannot wait until the next chapter.
| dragonsrgorgeous07 chapter 9 . 10/30/2007
I really like this, keep it up.
| aqua animosity chapter 9 . 10/23/2007
Aww thanks:) Nice chapter, update ASAP please_
| werewolfinlove chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
Yay! A very good start!
| Socks5454 chapter 8 . 8/8/2007
I just found this story and I love it!
| confessions.of.katijane chapter 7 . 8/4/2007
Good, positive start. Your characterizations are strong & the plotline's developing marvelously. I've just a couple suggestions for you to improve an already good story:
1. Watch the grammar-I know, this is ME speaking. My grammar blows & it's definitely worse than what I've seen on anyone else's, but it's still a nice touch to just run through your chapters before you post them.
2. Be a bit more descriptive-dialogue's great but it can only go so far.
3. Try and keep things in perspective. I guess what I'm thinking is Cedric's reaction to being caught. I know you want to make him a jerk, but the fact that he's cheating on her already makes him a jerk. I can't really see him laughing in her face right when he's caught. Otherwise, why would he have stayed with her, you know?
AND here are my favorite things about the story:
Katie breaking her arm by falling out of her bed was hilarious. I love the klutz angle.
I like having the other characters in the story all at various stages of their relationships. Makes things more realistic.
Katie & Fred's relationship seems legit, which is nice. And you've kept the twins in pretty good character, which is actually A LOT harder than it seems.
Write on, Hope. (Wow. That's kind of a cheesy pun. Didn't mean for it to be a pun. Okay. Stopping...now.)
| Beeeezus chapter 7 . 8/3/2007
I really like your story! Good pairing! I really like the twins. Poor Katie.