|Reviews for Odo the Odd and the Dreaded Maggot|
| Her Fantasy chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
Odo review number 9 (see my review for Nimbus 1944's if confused):
Very catchy! I can tell you had lots of fun with this. A dancing Odo and a maggot? That's hilarious! A truly amusing tale!
| SuGaRLiLy chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
I do like your take on dear Odo's life,
As a quick-footed, nimble young lad.
The idea of him prancing 'round a large field
Made me chuckle more than a tad.
Sad was I to read of poor Odo's demise,
All because of a creepy young bug.
Odo had such skill, was such a promising youth!
On my heartstrings it did tug.
So I say 'Bravo' to you for this well-written tale,
But I'm afraid I must say 'Ciao'!.
You did Odo justice, we knew that he died,
but you told us the 'why' and the 'how'!
| InkandPaper chapter 1 . 7/22/2007
Hehe, I like your version - the idea of Odo dying because he insulted a maggot is just too funny! :D
Oh, Odo the Oddball loved dancing too much
For it sent the poor guy to his death
If he had not yelled at the maggot from hell,
He wouldn't then have breathed his last breath.
What a sad way for a dancer to die,
But it was really Odo own fault.
He selfishly kept his dance-spot to himself,
And so earned the old maggot's assault.
| Ember Nickel chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
A short and sad story, and yet nonetheless
Quite comical. Its rhymes unique
It chronicles Odo, leaving no need to guess
How he became a myth with mystique.
| Sam chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
This is going to be a waste of review but...Wow...Uh...No comment...
| Dead-Luthien chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
Congratulation! Your poem is very funny and totally different from the others. You should know that you are now part of a C2 dedicated to odo's poems.
Check it out.
| Bagge chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
Odo the dancer, with smile and with hat
Was a fellow as smashing as few
The maggot, alas, was a grumpier sort
And a most dangerous kind of foe
The king of the meadow was thrown from his throne
His bravado was to no avail
But his story we sing, and to you - noble bard -
I say Thanks for this Odoish tale
| charlie brown chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
i think it's cool that you accually remembered the song. and tried to make it. it's very creative and original:) good job