|Reviews for Homecoming|
| Olu chapter 1 . 11/15/2007
This is the best so far... great story. Im looking forward to reading your book when it comes out.
| Stratagem Blue chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
A Russian spring, covered in snow. I find the ideal both beautiful and sad, as you described a lovely scene of "white diamonds" and yet, a frozen spring for Erik seems like the only spring suitable for a man with such a fate. I only wish it were longer, but I know there was a limit for the contest, was there not? Still, for four paragraphs and a sentence, you did put in a great amount of detail. I like the ritual of the tarot cards, and in the bleakest spring, he still has hope. A good concept to incorporate.