Uh how is that Xenophobic? That’s not a word that can be used to describe any of the main character let alone the Son family.

Stop making Chi-chi this crazy. And get off this frying pan of doom wagon.

not taking that bet, because it is everyones favorite pencil sharpener

Videl. Where is you right arm?

Sharpner. Give me 20 bucks

Sharpner. Give me my 5 bucks.

ROFLMAo! funny as Hell1 now this had the funny side of Dragonball Z pinned down like a rat in a spotlight.

If this story was meant to be funny you have failed. It was actually a bit painful to read only reason I finished it is because I have ocd and I can’t leave things unfinished

This was a weird story. The story line was a great idea. But with all the cartoon hijinks Golden idol, drawing board and magic duct tape. Too silly. Why is everyone crapping their pants? Repeatedly. Like nearly every chapter.

I am liking this story. But, Please, stop with all of the side comments. One they are not funny. Two, it is distracting from the story. Three, They make no sense. Also enough with the frypan. You are making Chichi out to be a abuser. After that please continue this story.

wew. Ilove it.

Great Fanfic,usually I'd quit reading a Gohan&Videl fanfic with such chaos in it but this fanfic was impressive!

I hate when people use child abuse as humor. And shame on gohan for just standing and watching his 7 YEAR OLD brother get beat with a frying pan. A good brother would have grabbed that frying pan and beat his mom with it.

Well, Sharpner had it coming.

God please stop making those little author notes in the middle of the book