Reviews for Making Love Instead Of Misery
reneexx chapter 19 . 3/8/2008
i think that this is FANTASTIC. the plot is interesting & the characters are as they would be on the show.

i have just a few suggestions:

1. work on punctuation/capitalization to avoid mistakes like this- ""get your shirt on" she heard Peters voice"

2. do spell checks! You put "gave a wierd look" but it's spelled weird. if you don't have a spell check on the program you use, when you upload the chapters, just press edit & it has one on there.

please don't take this the wrong way because i DO really love this! i just thought it would help.

& definitely PMS! :) peter got what was coming to him & i am way excited for the jemma-ness ;)
sharada614 chapter 19 . 3/6/2008
finally-Peter is such a jerk
KarmaClassic chapter 19 . 3/5/2008
:-P Peter totally sucks. I'm so happy Emma is done with him. I can't believe Mia would do that to her. Some friend! PMS
sing2me091 chapter 19 . 3/5/2008
poor emma.

yay now there can be more jemma!

post more.
KarmaClassic chapter 16 . 2/25/2008
I'm so glad you updated the story. Its really great and I love love love the Jemmaness of the new chapters. Also that little forshadowing with Manny looks like it could get really interesting
sing2me091 chapter 16 . 2/25/2008
haha jessica simpson is really dumb.

i love it.

post more.

-carly
Ellie CameronDB chapter 13 . 8/18/2007
This is cute but in chapter 13 you totally copied One Tree Hill which I find incredibly lame, try to change it up a bit.
cjluver109 chapter 13 . 8/8/2007
I like it! It's adorable.
sing2me091 chapter 13 . 8/1/2007
so cute ]

postmore.

iloveit.

-carly
bigsis0829 chapter 13 . 7/27/2007
Jay's a good guy at heart! PMS!
Alexa chapter 13 . 7/26/2007
Great chapter [: i love how Emma got jealous. Post more soon!
DixonsPianoGirl chapter 11 . 7/22/2007
Keep on going. You are still great.
JemmaLuver chapter 11 . 7/21/2007
good chap!update soon!
bigsis0829 chapter 11 . 7/21/2007
Cute! PMS!
sing2me091 chapter 11 . 7/20/2007
loveit.

postmore.

-carly
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