Reviews for Heat Wave
Bones2014 chapter 1 . 5/22/2014
Wow, that was HOT! Pun intended:-)
Yoruichi89 chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
Great Story
Beizanten chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Extremely hot and steamy
Hikari-Kayko chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
bwahahah! that was tasty! XD i was a little disapointed that it was a dream, but there's always hope, right? awesome one shot!

4k101 chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
didnt see that one coming nice job :)
SarahShalomDavid chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
hahahaha that was funny
The Critic chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
That was very well-written. And hot. (No pun intended.)
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
Great story! I really enjoyed it!
inonolimits00 chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
that was um hot... to say the least P lol great job


Owl Emporium chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
OMG this was SO funny! Haha I loved this! :D

ShipperCrazed - FanFicCrazy chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
Just found this. HOT HOT HOT! And I'm not talking about the heat wave! Too bad you turned it into a dream (just kidding).

This would have been a great beginning for a multi chapter fic.

Any chance you'd reconsider? **begging on this end**
mumrulz chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
You're kidding us aren't you? This can't b e your first M fic!

So HOT and not just from the heatwave. LOL.

It was so descritpive from the beginning to the end. Loved the last paragraph :-)
luneress chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
Wow. That was...something. That was, good. Amzaing writing job. Wonderfully writen. I have no words to describe how incredably hot and sensual that was. awsome job.
Habita chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
WOW. That was great! What a sexy fic! I totally loved it!

Thank you very much for sharing! :-)
mag31 chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
Wow, that was a great oneshot. As you spoke about a challenge, well I guess you won. I'd like to say anything which could help you improve but I just can't, as for me it was perfect, and the end made me laugh a lot
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