|Reviews for The Secret of Katherine|
| Zenshades chapter 8 . 4/2
Okay. First, let me just say how amazing this was. Nail-biting, on the edge of my seat amazing. But I've noticed you have this tendency not to finish stories- not to be rude or hurtful because this is something you're doing out of the goodness of your heart and love for zennies. But since you're stuff is so fantastically heart-wrenching, I desperately, desperately want to know what happens next and I know I'm not alone.
So I humbly beseech you to finish The Secret of Katherine so it will be easier for me to move on with my life instead of frantically rechecking this page every second day.
Thank you very much for your time,
Have a good day.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2015
Man your writing is amazing. I'm reading this in 2015 and you haven't updated in years. But the story is so fucking amazing that the way it leaves us hanging is almost painful. But seriously man great writing, great creativity and uniques. You should really make this a career if you haven't already
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/17/2014
I really want to know who was sending the boxes will you plz finish it?
| ShanghaiLily chapter 8 . 8/11/2012
I know it's been eons since you gave this one up, but I'm following the story anyway in the hopes that you one day decide to pick it back up. Such a great 20yrs in the future fic. Not too many of those for T70S IMO. Really suspenseful and I'm dying to know what happens-maybe you could put an author note to let us know how it wraps up-even if you never finish?
| Banzigglydamn chapter 8 . 8/17/2011
Please oh please continue it's been a while, but this is a GREAT story!
| MistyMountainHop chapter 8 . 7/5/2011
I roll my eyes. I know I shouldn't, but I can't help it. I hate her. I really hate her, and I want her to know it. "She probably did it on purpose, so you'd get all stupid over her the way you always do."
This is *so* how a teenager would think.
Then again, she wants me to believe that a drunken night of infidelity resulting in an unwanted pregnancy and shotgun wedding is an amazing love story.
She's so judgmental! *lol*
"In fact, it was almost as if we were never together," I say. Again, Jackie looks at me and I shrug. "Not really, but we pretty much acted like it, at least to each other's faces."
Nice S8 reference - and correction.
Tried not to notice the tag, or the HJ written on it in red marker.
This detail *love*. And that Jackie gave the shirt back is so sad.
Man, another story I want to see the progression and end of. I realllllly want the rest of it. *sigh* I'm sure I'm not alone in that, either. *lol* I'd love to know the rest of what led up to that drunken night between J/H. I'm assuming the drunk driver who was responsible for Kitty's death was also responsible for a miscarriage Donna had.
And Donna is pretty reprehensible in this story. Whereas Jackie and Hyde's love for each other is incredible. I absolutely adore how you've written it here. And it doesn't take anything away from the love for their kids. You're able to maintain that balance. It's terrific.
Anyway, I'll just imagine that J/H eventually got through to their daughter - and that they also set their boundaries with Donna. Maybe even verbally slapped her down. Or, in an ideal world, helped Donna to see the error of her ways. And then Donna could work on being happy herself instead of trying to steal it from Jackie.
It's a testament to your writing that an unfinished story like this makes your readers huger for more.
| MistyMountainHop chapter 5 . 7/5/2011
So far, this is a very well done future J/H story. D I like that their lives aren't perfect (that makes it interesting). And I love that Hyde and Jackie are so clearly in love still.
He's rubbing my back, and I lift my head, looking up at him. His eyes are so soft...over the years, he's really lost the hardness. Not his edge. Never. He's still a paranoid bad ass. But there's more to him then that, always has been. The only difference is that now, he doesn't resent that.
This is terrific characterization.
"What I want to know is how you know about the...the..." Jackie looks at Hyde. Of course she does. She's always been like that, dependent on a man.
Wow. Donna is really hostile in this story, isn't she? Taking out her misery on J/H. She's also really passive-aggressive. She basically wants to claim Jake as her own. She has this sense of entitlement to Jackie's kids. I find her crappy behavior really fascinating. And I'm looking forward to seeing if she wakes up or not.
And Katherine. Poor girl. She ended up with a Kelso-type. Her sense of the world has been shattered (for now). First Tommy's infidelity makes her terribly vulnerable, than that note she got - KABOOM. But it's a little strange that she doesn't ultimately trust her parents. It seems as if J/H have raised her well and lovingly so. The fact that she didn't go straight to them with this note means she doesn't have a foundation of trust with them...
Unless Donna has something to do with that. Katherine seems to resent Jackie's imperfections. Maybe she'd idealized her mother, and what Donna's told her broke that idealization and flipped it upside-down.
That aside, though, I hope J/H can get through to their daughter and restore the trust and security she deserves to have in her life.
| Weasley's Revenge chapter 8 . 3/4/2011
I'm really loving this and could you please update...please i will write some jh smut for you if you continue any of these. :)
| Cat chapter 8 . 12/24/2010
I love it. Hope you update soon.
| InLoveWithEC chapter 8 . 12/7/2009
Please update! This is a really good fic)
| actlikesummer chapter 8 . 10/22/2009
I know you haven't upudated in a while but please write more chapters! I have become hooked on this story and I need to know more about the secret!
| nannygirl chapter 8 . 10/4/2009
Wow! that was amazing! I couldn't leave my seat until i finished. Hope it's just a on a very long hatius and will be back up soon. i really wanna know who's been sending Katie the boxes. Oo and for katie and jackie to make up. Awesome story!
| beaglelover719 chapter 8 . 8/11/2009
Wow. This is so good. I was really bummed to see nothing after chapter 8. I want to know what happened. I want to know who the boxes are from. I want to know who told Donna that Jackie almost had an abortion. Oh, and I really want Katherine to apologize to her mom! And for Hyde to take Donna down. Seriously, this is a really great story. I love the Jackie and Hyde interaction. I don't know how the writers of T7S could have ever separated them in the final season, obviously they never WATCHED the show and saw the chemistry between the two characters.
| MeggyandHaku chapter 8 . 4/4/2009
please update! don't discontinue!
| Jubilee3 chapter 8 . 2/1/2009
I can't wait for an update! I love future Hyde and Jackie, and their kids.