|Reviews for Wings on which to Fly|
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/3
Thanks for your time and the story! I hope you are successful in life!
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/24
is naruto the uke or seme?
| BloodRedNightinGale435 chapter 1 . 6/22
Can I adopt this story plus the other naruto story
| lucien.francine chapter 14 . 5/1
More chapter please
| Lil.Pantera chapter 14 . 4/22
I appreciate your honesty and wish you luck with your condition and hope that you get well
| CheekyChamp2015 chapter 11 . 2/3
Can remake this story so only Naruto is Seme
| yukio00 chapter 14 . 1/15
Omg, that's bad... I hope you get better.. N it's k your story is still live in ma heart(like seriously.. I loved it.. Last time I lost the story forgot the name but then when I see notification about the story that just got update I saw this n I went happy like hell.. Loved it
| kyothefallenkit chapter 14 . 1/7
I believe that you can choose to do whatever you wish to do, especially if it helps steer away from deteriorating your health. Hadst are important so do what you need to do to relax your poor hands. Wish you all the best x3
| Officer Dibble chapter 14 . 12/28/2015
This is a real shame as the stories are fantastic reads, even if another adopts them they just wont ever be the same. Take care
| momocolady chapter 14 . 12/28/2015
thank you for telling us
| smiley1999 chapter 6 . 10/28/2015
I'm rolling man this is halarous thousand years of pain no bitch hahahaha I love this
| KuroShiroNeko-chan chapter 13 . 4/6/2015
Me gusta mucho tu otro fic, aunque es una pena que no sigas este también... En fin...
Como has dicho, escribir es un pasatiempo...
De todas formas ánimo y que te vaya bien!
| XxYoukai-KaitouxX chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
Oh my EVERYTHING I love this story! It's probably one of the best fanfics I've ever read (and I've read a LOT). I think this would also be a great mpreg! I never usually read harem fics but I'm really glad I decided to read this.
My only complaint is that the chapters are so short and few TT-TT
Tbh I wasn't expecting Shinobu to be the first but I think that was because I was kinda hoping it would be Shikamaru lol.
I really really liked the sentence where naruto was asking Shino permission to add more men to their relationship very cryptically pretty lol.
I also enjoyed Naruto recognizing Konohamaru as pretty much his child, I hope there will be plenty more "found children".
Now! I wanted to offer (more like beg) you (to take) my services BETA services because I would absolutely love to help out with this story whether it be spelling or ideas I'm very familiar with Naruto and have history of beta editing for the series. So just feel free to pm me ;D Btw I go by either Undertaker or Synn
(Sorry about all the rambling)
| KunaiKyuubi77 chapter 13 . 1/30/2015
Could you please update the original story
| shadowcat ninja chapter 7 . 12/16/2014
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so CUTE I love how Naruto is so motherly aura