Reviews for Wings on which to Fly
KuroShiroNeko-chan chapter 13 . 4/6
Me gusta mucho tu otro fic, aunque es una pena que no sigas este también... En fin...
Como has dicho, escribir es un pasatiempo...
De todas formas ánimo y que te vaya bien!
XxYoukai-KaitouxX chapter 1 . 3/22
Oh my EVERYTHING I love this story! It's probably one of the best fanfics I've ever read (and I've read a LOT). I think this would also be a great mpreg! I never usually read harem fics but I'm really glad I decided to read this.

My only complaint is that the chapters are so short and few TT-TT

Tbh I wasn't expecting Shinobu to be the first but I think that was because I was kinda hoping it would be Shikamaru lol.

I really really liked the sentence where naruto was asking Shino permission to add more men to their relationship very cryptically pretty lol.

I also enjoyed Naruto recognizing Konohamaru as pretty much his child, I hope there will be plenty more "found children".

Now! I wanted to offer (more like beg) you (to take) my services BETA services because I would absolutely love to help out with this story whether it be spelling or ideas I'm very familiar with Naruto and have history of beta editing for the series. So just feel free to pm me ;D Btw I go by either Undertaker or Synn

(Sorry about all the rambling)
KunaiKyuubi77 chapter 13 . 1/30
Could you please update the original story
shadowcat ninja chapter 7 . 12/16/2014
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so CUTE I love how Naruto is so motherly aura
Hades' Neko chapter 13 . 10/3/2014
Holy shit please update this. Please. I don't know what else to b say but please update.
shutupandreview11 chapter 13 . 9/23/2014
my yaoi senses died today and gave birth to the worlds biggest yaoi fan. me
Guest chapter 12 . 7/17/2014
Did you copy this out of another story cause it is exactly word for word from another story I read just before this one! If you can't come up with your own story and shit then don't bother writing because that is sad and pathetic!
SonofNaraku chapter 10 . 5/26/2014
RYN! (Yo. Stupid cousin stole my laptop, meh. So, yeahs. I like how everyone who commented on this chapter is having a go at the guy who pissed you off. Jerks like that need to get a life. Preferably one down a hole, far away from technology)
SonofNaraku chapter 10 . 5/26/2014
... I am 13. (Name's Ryn; I stole my cousin's account _ Forgot the pass code. And anyway, yeah. So the world's a bitch, ain't it?)
crimson reaper 218 chapter 13 . 12/25/2013
Please update soon...
Watermelonsmellinfellon chapter 13 . 12/1/2013
I like how you have Naruto in this! It's hot!
BeautifulLotus chapter 13 . 11/4/2013
I want more
naturally stupid chapter 3 . 9/6/2013
sasuke should be the seme, oh I am loving the story so far
Darkheart126 chapter 13 . 8/10/2013
China doll chapter 6 . 7/17/2013
I Thought naruto was uke
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