Reviews for After Vol VIII
Katy chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
Nice story,I really liked it :)
Lisa Cooper chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
I liked your going away scene between Mia and Michael better than when they parted angry at each other. Thank you for your story, L.
IamNotworthy chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
Loved It! Way more realistic than some of the crap on the web. I hope you'll consider making this into a story. I'd totally trust this kind of plot continuation with you. Your Mia has the potential to grow into a more mature character. I can definatly see this turning into an awesome story about Mia and Michael's long distance relationship,his arrival,her birthday

,maybe even dealing with JP's advancements. Please consider it.
Mari27 chapter 1 . 11/21/2011

I like your ending... it's so beautiful... i hope this thing really happened in the book.
Black Sun Upon An Icy Sky chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
This rocked XD
tainabe chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
I loved. so swett
CracKing97 chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
Perfect ) I hated the ending of the eighth book too! I wish it would've ended like this. But still, I LOVED the way it ended in Book10 more than anything! XD
rezmutt chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
this is much better than the original. love it lots.
InkWellPage chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
this story is so good. i can't wait to read all of your other stories.
sweetlilthing chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
Well, I was reading one of your other stories (Without Words) and I saw this in your profile and decided to read it too~

I prefer it over the true events of what actually happened... And you don't actually find out whether or not Michael leaves!

Unlike yours :P

Good one-shot anyway! :)
newyorknewyork1022 chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
this is really good and funny

too bad the 9th book wasnt like that but maybe the tenth will
Luna Ace chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
Oh my god. I like this.. I was so shocked when they broke up, and then I got to scared to read Book Nine. Anyway nice way to put them back together.

SilverLunarStar chapter 1 . 1/23/2008
I haven't gotten around to reading VI but I do know that MT broke up so that's why I've been... putting it on hold for a while...

Wouldn't it have been wonderful if it had ended this way? Then I would totally read it asap!

Great job!

velrexby chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
you have to read the newest PD it is so good! I only read like two chappys and i cryed! I read it on

this is way better then the original ending, sorry Meg C. but it is true
Literati Lover chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
This is a MUCH better ending! I wanted to cry after reading the end! I hope they end up together! If she ends up with JP I will be so sad!

Anyway, you wrote so well! I love it! )
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