Nice job on a tough piece.

This is really great! It has the underlying sense of House wishing Wilson didn't want any other brotherly person but him and how Wilson must feel...Yay!

Man, I can't say anymore. Just perfect. In character. Another twist in this dynamic that is awesome. Just perfect.

this is a really great fanfic! I sorta wish Wilson had found his bro, but thats not realistic. You must watch this show alot because you captured the characters perfectly!

-ellie

Absolutely wonderful...you write House and Wilson so well, and so *true*...the entire fic is engaging and heart-breaking and I was completely swept up in it-I absolutely loved it!

Beautiful end line. The two kids so similar to Wilson and Michael made my heart break. Wonderful job.

A very compelling story; I thought I'd just glance at it but then found that I couldn't stop reading. You have written one of the best in-character depictions of both House and Wilson that I've ever seen. Wilson is tightly controlled in his emotions and yet as sympathetic and compassionate as always, and House is as outwardly harsh yet, in the end, comes through as Wilson's truest friend. His last line is a real killer.

I truly enjoyed this; great work!