Reviews for Forbidden Fruit
JWolfcat chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
There are few things funnier than misunderstanding so it is good that misunderstanding are forgiveable Good story, had me rofl
HinawithLove chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Funny and witty...:)
worldreminiscence chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
HAHAHA XDDD

I knew! I knew Hinata and Neji weren't doing things BUT didn't think that they were eating fruit XD ahahaha lmao! u made me laugh XD thanks :D

Hanabi's misunderstanding is pretty cute and hilarious XD She has dirty mind than Hinata...obviously XD
hawtchic2000 chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
just shows you how the human mind works. i thought they were doing it, and i KNEW they weren't.

Jay:That doesn't make sense.

Honey:*throws rock at Jay* It does to me *cries*

Candy:*comforts honey* it's okay, it was a nice fanfic.
AngelEyes87 chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
I really enjoyed this oneshot. And like Hanabi, I really was convinced Neji and Hinata were doing the deed as well - I lived Hanabi's reactions when she was eavesdropping. The ending was fantastic and amusing. Eating strawberries with cream in private? LOL, very priceless! XD
LunaSeasMoonChild chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
LoLXD I was very much amused. XD

I really liked how you portrayed Neji and Hinata's closeness in this fic. And Hanabi. LoLXD. I'd pat her head for the embarassment. LoLXD Hinata's lines were funny! Like, 'you naughty boy' sounds so off her personality but that's really funny coming from her shy nature. It was amusing! LoLXD
MrWezlum18 chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
innocence of mind my ass! she assumed they were doing incest! lol
Moonlight-Arashi chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
i loved it!
x.Nanako-chan.x chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
xDD OMG this was hilarious I knew they weren't 'doing it' but I had no clue WHAT they were doing in ther -.-; and hanabi... with her sick little childish mind... eh I would've thought the same thing xD
LonelyHearts2008 chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
OMG! EPIC WIN! This had me until the end. This was fall-on-the-floor-roll-around-laughing hilarious!
QjD chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
Its crazy Im the 5th review for both these storys; I feel special. Oh once again nice job.
salote chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
so freakin funny!
winterkaguya chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
hahhahahaa...so funny! i can imagine hanabi's face turned blue! great one! loved it...
oishichibi chapter 1 . 8/22/2007
woah that was soo..., like hanabi that totally got me XD... that was awesome i've read a couple of stories like this but this truly tops them all !
XSuicuneX chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
*dies laughing* Ah...poor innocent, sweet Hanabi...though...those two are being awfully friendly about eating strawberries...o.O Actually, I like strawberries too, but not THAT much...hmm...whipped cream...sounds good, I should try it.

What I find funny is how Hanabi stayed listening even though she was so horrified by it at first. heh, now I've got an image of Hanabi becoming a huge Nejihina fangirl. XD Writing fanfictions about them, drawing pictures...that sort of thing.