Reviews for A Tragic Christmas Eve
Momo-chan12 chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
aww,that was a sad story.(pouts)If Karen hadnt been drinking,then everyone would be okay-but I guess you cant go back in time(or can you?)It was a very good story with a great message!Good work,and keep writing!
Awesome Rapidash chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
That was a really sad story. I did have to think as I read the end that could this tragedy have been prevented if Karen hadn't been drinking. Sorry that's just my two cents worth on that subject. Otherwise your story was nicely written and I liked it a lot. _ Cya!

Oh by the way, 'UMA' trranslates to 'horse' in Japanese.
Libra1 chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
What a sad story :(

The only problem I have with it is your incorrect use of "you're". Remember, you're you are. If you say the sentence outloud like that replacing you're with you are and it doesn't sound right then you are using the wrong form. Replace it with your :)

Otherwise good job! This story really made me feel sad :( That means you did a good job writing!