Reviews for Onii-chan
Skittles1 chapter 1 . 10/30/2002
That was so incredably good! You're very talented!
Wolf Amongst Elves chapter 1 . 10/3/2002
*cry* Waah, poor Natsumi-chan! *sniffle* This is beautiful.
Catwho chapter 1 . 7/23/2001
Oh, man, you've got me in tears. Absolutely stunning work. Poor Natsumi-chan. I do have one question, though, but I'll ask that in the forum since it hasn't got much to do with your wonderful wonderful story. For not having written for two years, you did a spectacular job :)
DELETE THIS PROFILE chapter 1 . 7/22/2001
Beatiful! The first-person perspective enhances it very nicely (: and it has a great flow! So sad ;_; and how the feather disapeared at the end... aww ;_;
Oniko-Neko chapter 1 . 7/21/2001
That is INCREDIBLY sad ;-; I love how you wrote this. Please, write more!