|Reviews for Only The Beggining|
| Birdofdarkness chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
it was goodish but first of all its spelled *Azarath* duh! and i hate tht says "curiosity killed the cat" i love kittens and cats! but anyways make stories tht r longer _
| CappinicinoGirl chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
It's a good story, but you need to work on the structure. Most people don't have the patience to sit and read a block of words, it gets hard. Try starting a new paragraph whenever someone says something new for example. It does make a huge difference.
| oxoFENCINGforVENDETTAoxo chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
Girl, that was awesome! Hope you update soon !
Yur B.F.F. Caribbean Titan
| beautifulpurpleflame chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
Not bad for a first try. You need to work on the structure so you don't have one large block of words. Check out other well written stories to see how a story should be set up. Also, make sure you don't go too OOC when writing. Other than those little things I thought it was very good and hope to see more from you soon. _
| Elf-of-the-Sword chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
Good start, it's getting there; but you have some spelling errors here and there. So keep it up with a little practice you'll get there.
| spam29rice chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
Wow, I like it. I guess you didn't need my instructions then, eh? You did a great job on the story though.