Reviews for One Wish
Please Finish chapter 16 . 8/8
I'm going to make my first fanfiction account just to follow you, and see if you continue anything. Please finish this story!
Finish the Story chapter 16 . 8/8
Please finish this! It's a really good story!
anonymous chapter 16 . 2/28
im really pumped for this awesome story continuing im sorta hoping maybe the main character evolved into sylveon to fend of against dark types but however they are in sinnoh so im worried it might not work unless that machine accident with dna did something other then transform into eevee? or possibly she would would have to sacrifice her own humanity to save another innthe future? but this story i will have to see GoodLuck /
guest chapter 16 . 2/24
plz continue story plz
Guest chapter 7 . 2/13
First, Psychic, not physics, second, starred, not stared. You came stared at, but you can't stare in a movie. Third, Riolus are dogs, not foxes. The story is good, I very much enjoy the idea, but I'm just saying some constructive criticism.
bunnylover chapter 12 . 2/3
please make a sylveon in this story! I want all the eeveelutions!
boompikachu chapter 3 . 10/15/2014
This story is very interesting
Goldspark chapter 16 . 10/6/2014
Nice twist in the story. Its good to have a man vs nature conflict, especially in the pokemon universe. Hope we get to see Lily's brother try again to capture her to add to the plot.
NYSTLSportsFan chapter 16 . 8/27/2014
Wow, it's been a long, long time since I read this. It has a great premise, and is also very well written. It's such a shame that it seems destined to remain unfinished; I really liked where it was going.


Eeveefan200 chapter 16 . 12/6/2013
Come on. Cold you please write to the end. I don't care if she dies, I want to hear the end.
Cats n' Raptors chapter 16 . 10/10/2013
Cats n' Raptors chapter 12 . 10/10/2013
Knew it!
Cats n' Raptors chapter 5 . 10/10/2013
Guest chapter 16 . 9/2/2013
are you still making this story or did you stop?
TreePyro chapter 16 . 7/15/2013
I don't want this to turn out like some other stories that just stop in the middle of the story I want this one to go on! ;(
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