Reviews for Notes on a Z fighter
Guest chapter 1 . 4/25/2014
Do you have any ideas for the sequel as of know
mobbb chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
wow this story is very intense i cant wait to read the sequal:) i enjoyed every moment of it and hope the sequal will be up soon
CrazyKitarina chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
OOO a sequel! Please do write it, I should have been to bed 2 hours ago but I got so into this fict and I just had to read it twice... So well done. Please write more!
xXxlaffytaffymonsterxXx chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
awesome story i wished there was more chapters for it but anyways i LOVE it ! :)
no name chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
this is good keep it going
TaminFury chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
eh well quite interesting while a good premise it was lacking alittle. I'm not saying it was bad, not at all. It seemed more based around Trunks idolizing Goku and pleasuring him than a relationship. I mean did Goku do anything for Trunks benifit? Even the bum sex was in the end for Goku's pleasure. Goku also seemed very OOC with dropping of his morals and slight cruelty to unwarrented selfishness (i.e. saving the world and sacrificing himself many times to an almost post-Bulma Vegeta attitude and then being overly innocent). Plus I would just like to ask what hell is hirudergarn? I can't even tell what language its from because it doesn't strike me as Japanese.
A Monochrome World chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
Your grammar and spelling still needs some work, but the point of view was nicely sorted and that's what I loved about this fic.
BelleMorte09 chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
Wow. That isn't only the best yaoi I have ever read, it's also one of the best fanfics! I can't believe how well you managed to maintain the characters' personalities. Also, this is the first yaoi I've read where when the main characters say " I love you", it isn't forced or cheesy. I can't wait to read more from you!
Tala chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
it was awesome!
Sevvus chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
lol that was great!

...but who cleaned up the parents bed and the kitchen XD
anon chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
brilliant.

please write more stories!
Jokermanxanimefan-writer chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
Awesome story, I loved it! Please write a sequel! I'd love to read the end if it! The suspense is murderuos!
Peya Luna chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
wow! o.k, maybe the spelling is a bit creative and i personly prefer sexscenes without so much talking, but hey, i love the story anyway!and im gonna check right now if this promised sequell is already posted!
Cardboard Rocketship chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
Haha, good. You have some Capitalization,. grammar, and spelling errors, but other than that really great!
smackthat92 chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
That was the best story i ever read you should write some more like this.
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