Reviews for A New Life and A Better Me:ON HOLDBEING REWRITTEN
Guest chapter 4 . 7/12/2016
Your story is really interesting but it would be better if it was more espaced(don't really know how to say that sorry). And it's Sasuke(not Saske,i think saske is a nickname), Sakura(not Sakara), Hanabi(not Hinabi), Tsunade(not Tsunde) and Gaara(not Garra).
Good luck for the next chapters !
Ninja Unicorn chapter 4 . 4/12/2016
Hinata's birthday is actually December 26
divazee26 chapter 19 . 12/19/2015
Awesome can't wait for the end ,#loving it
jane kim chapter 19 . 6/4/2015
seriously you had me crying there
back blued chapter 19 . 3/10/2015
Pleas update
Guest chapter 8 . 12/28/2014
Its Byakugan and Sharingan e
Guest chapter 4 . 12/28/2014
It's Jyuunken and Gaara
Sabie0521 chapter 19 . 11/21/2013
Please continue this story!
BLUE AVENGER18 chapter 19 . 8/21/2013
hurry up update
ilovehinata4ever chapter 19 . 8/17/2013
Updatee pls its awesomeeee! I really love it!;3 sp no.1: itachi rite?2:gaara 3 is naruto or sasuke rite than four is one of them who is 5,6,7? Havee more itahina moment pls they need moree love!
me chapter 19 . 9/24/2012
please update soon!
lialinnh chapter 19 . 9/11/2012
Please update soon. I think this is the 100th review so please update, even if you haven't updatedin over a year.
NeitherSaneNorInsane chapter 19 . 6/5/2011
Shite from the first chapter to this. Wow I'm very imressed with the imporved grammar. I read this the while night and tomorrow was meant to be beginning of school and it's 3:15am wow. Your writing improved greatly but it's byakugan not byacktogan and it's also sharingan not sharingun. At least you got tsunade name right. I hope you manage to update this soon. I love it.

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Am I right?
NeitherSaneNorInsane chapter 8 . 6/5/2011
Whe you were describing how they changed you were missing info like 's hair was turning 's eyes ect the names weren't there also when there was an … there would be words missing there too
NeitherSaneNorInsane chapter 6 . 6/5/2011
Oh shite a whole friggin harem. But seriously 7? Would they be ok sharing her I mean 2 or 3 yes but 7? I think it's too much. But who cares them fighting over her would he a funny sight and thei over protectiveness bwahaha I can imagine it
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