|Reviews for Cataract|
| seventhe chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
I liked this a lot. I really like pieces that examine Rinoa - I'll admit, I didn't like her much in the game, and so (somewhat conversely) I enjoy reading introspective things about her from other people.
What I liked in this particular piece was Rinoa's growing up - her admitting that she'd been naive, self-centered, spoiled, whatever the term is - and realizing it, realizing her father may be right, realizing things about SeeD.
I liked the thought that Rinoa, no matter how subconsciously, took the Sorceress powers to impress Squall! That has a lot of potential and also sounds like something she'd do to prove herself - something which would then backfire, and possibly teach her a lesson.
Anyway, excellent work! I hope to see more introspective work from you.
| Selphie Ivy chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
So sad! I love both this and your other story, but this was sadder. Did Rinoa make a mistake? How depressing is that thought?
I thinks its sad about how Rinoa isn't fitting into the group, like most fics write her in as. Nice, interesting ideas, but you have to write something more upbeat, ok? *sniff* x