|Reviews for The First|
| Selonianth chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
hn i'm gonna guess its...Nel
| tonraq chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
I've read this before, and just found it again, and damn. I love it. I could see this being an actual part of the plot; I wish Kubo would say more as to Yachiru and Kenpachi's backgrounds. But you've done a splendid job making it up yourself ;)
| Fuck You FFN chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
| brandeee chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
Very intriguing idea for a couple of reasons, not least of which being that it would explain quite a bit about Yachiru.
| White Butterfly chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
This, was very much liked by me. Doesn't quite feel like canon to me, but still a lovely interpretation.
| shadowsinfire chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
Unlikely, but so, so imaginable. Nice work
| Feafea chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
It would be fun reading Yachiru and Urahara meeting in this case.. hehe..
| labonsoirfemme chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
It is just like Urahara to absolutely HAVE to try something first, even if he knows it's bad. Yachiru? I was suprised at that. This was very good!
| Sophia Prester chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
Oh, this is very clever. I don't think I've ever seen this take on Yachiru's origins before, but you make it sound plausible. I also thought that your writing flowed smoothly; its spareness and directness fit the tone of the story perfectly well.