|Reviews for An Unforeseen Conseqeuence|
| madqueeen chapter 6 . 10/20/2015
Well that's a bummer. I wish you could've continued, but I know the feeling of lost motivation. Thanks for this short-lived story though! I really liked it.
| Pyryp chapter 6 . 7/30/2015
Shame you passed this on to Agent-G. The quality of his writing is so much lower that it was a very jarring to shift to his version of the story.
| Karasu Kagami chapter 6 . 2/5/2014
Holy crap, Tsunade might actually confess to jiraya! wooot!
And yes. i entirely believe that tsunade was in love with jiraya just like he was in love with her. but she became to jaded with love and loss and time. and both to habitual about their reactions (like naruto and sakura's ask-refuse-punch routine only swapping compliment/perve with ask and punch with would-kill-a-lesser-nin-beat-down) that nothing would ever come of it. and now tsunade's finally making a move! jiraya will not know what to do with this sudden change. after all, tsunade was/is the love of his life-the unattainable dream...so what'll he do when he perves and she askes him to prove it? DDD
| Karasu Kagami chapter 4 . 2/5/2014
Now im curious as to how far sakura will push this. after all naruto has always been her fanboy her fall back every time sasuke blowed her off and in some way her best friend and speaking as someone who doesn't date (asexual) but has a best friend who absolutely loves being in love (and never sees heartbreak coming)...it can get a bit...worrying. what if they like him too and he leaves and doesn't come back (every time he dates him and his world revolve around her and he stops spending any time with me or his other friends). what if the fall out breaks him and i cant fix it (im hyper rational but empathic enough to be a good shoulder to cry on-seriously at this point i feel like it should be in my resumes). She's probably terrified of loosing her teammate/bestfriend/fallback/hero to ino. Add in the secret-unconcious hero worship and her rivalry with ino (plus the us-against-the-world vibe team seven seems to get all the time)...this will be interesting. and it all relies on ino (or someone else) getting it into naruto's head that...maybe ino wouldnt say no to a date?
also-damn. shika doesnt know yet.
wonder when hinata's 'naruto-senses' will start firing. sakura was one sided from him...but how will she take a more agressive girl going after her crush?
also-naruto was very cute with the whole moon scene. just thought id mention it. p
| Karasu Kagami chapter 3 . 2/5/2014
Aaaand her courage fails her.
Good try ino! Though now Shika and the others will have to be involved...
Wonder how long it'll take for Shika to pick up on Ino's change of heart?
Also, i feel like Sakura feels sisterly feelings for Naruto but with a touch of hero worship (all unconciously and like pavlovs dogs it was unintentionally taught to her by naruto always managing somehow to save the day) which at times (mostly due to him asking her out so often when he was a preteen) she confuses for notplatonic emotions...also as was shown in the manga; even if she did suddenly 'realize her feelings' and declare her UNDYING LOVE...Naruto wouldnt believe her. As she quite literally pounded into his skull the exact opposite. Honestly i see the whole thing as a misunderstanding. I think Naruto decided he wanted to be -friends- with the sad but pretty little girl from way back when but thought asking her out on a (play) date was the correct response. But by the time Sakura's parents had warned her off (badseed!badseed!) or shed met ino and fallen for sasuke so took it as well, an actual romanic request. And refused. Violently. (Abusively even.) But Naruto had desided he would just keep trying to make that friend and so kept asking. Then with his limited knowledge of friendship/romantic feelings, decided he loved her. Obviously. And then the ask-refuse-punch-ask-refuse-punch-thing...sorta became a habit for both of them. and then three year training bit happened. naruto stopped asking so much (actually i cant remember him actively trying to get with her in a serious manner after the time skip) so sakura stopped refusing/beating him. the feelings didnt really change but they weren't really romantic...just...misunderstood in my opinion. of course being misunderstood everyone reads them as possibly inlove or not. including everyone from hinata to jiraya and the two of them. and poor ino gets to read the misunderstood emotes and be confused. poor girl. hopefully shikamaru and maybe hinata can help. hinata because she might maybe understand naruto best of all and shikamaru because he's brilliant...if a bit troublesome. bit since ino's other romantic interest is a missingnin whos rather a backstabbing traitor...im sure hed be more happy with the change and help it along some. inoichi might not be so pleased when he finds out she spoke to the kyubbi by way of mind jutsu...which im sure -someone- told her not to use on anyone outside of spar/battle...and warned her off naruto in particular. Im actually really surprised inoichi warned ino off naruto as a child though, as a high up ninja who worked with minato and kushina and is part of the council etc. (he should know about kushina being junchiriki and all about minato's seal) id expect he would've seen naruto as sarutobi did rather then the demon like the civillians...is inos mom a civillian?
sorry for rambling!
| thecartoongirl22 chapter 6 . 3/21/2013
This is always such a cute story loved it event the second time reading it
| 1sunfun chapter 6 . 2/8/2012
A really, really good, nice, interesting, exciting and original story.
| alfamky chapter 6 . 1/25/2012
I would love you but you just had to leave one of the stories that got most my attention UNFINISHED...
Sigh. And you flat out told me that it was gone for good...at least I got saved from the dreadful anticipation of an update every time I got online...which is, very frequent.
I first came across your stories from a fanfiction recommendation site, and your writing style gripped me. It was touching, and the most valuable thing was, the stuff you wrote actually seemed possible, as in, likely to happen, logically. But the One step ahead story about Sauske seeing Konoha in ruins...that was not possible...just hilariously funny to hell...
Also...I do think you must have aced every vocabulary test ever taken, or is it I suck at english...
I've taken a liking to your well place metaphors~ They give me a descriptive image about, well, everything, basically.
I sorta didn't get the sudden Tsunade-"chan" from Sakura, but the rest was nicely paced, slow and sure~
Anyway, I liked it~
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/30/2011
So you're saying that Naruto gets sexually aroused by the kage bushin no justu
| Doom Marine 54 chapter 5 . 3/4/2011
Naruto: "Yeah, I'm totally an idiot for not picking up on social cues that I never had the chance to learn as a child because there was no one to teach me them."
| Sevvus chapter 6 . 10/12/2010
why ish dare no more?
it was so cuuuuute
| Hammerchuckery chapter 6 . 9/21/2010
Woo! Great short story!
| Phibriglex chapter 3 . 7/4/2010
i LOVED that little thing in the middle, pink or yellow? totally caught me off guard, i actually thought he was trying to decide between sakura and ino xD good job!
| Rei Azzura kun chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
Love this... Fav...
| Toriano.Flacko chapter 2 . 3/23/2010
How old are they in this, again? Thought I saw somewhere earlier that one was eleven and the other was twelve? I know you said Naruto still had the orange jumpsuit... but didn't he get rid of that after his training with Jaraiya? I mean...? Something about the Akatsuki and bringin' Sasuke back, but still...?
tell Him if He's out of line here; He honestly doesn't know... and He's confused so very easily...