(Once again) Aw.. pretty. D

The pentameter is a little weird, but if you're following the example of the Songs then I guess it's to be expected.

This almost reads like a passage from the Song of Solomon; very nicely written.

Thanks for the lovely reviews in my Labyrinth story.

Love this emotion and feeling. Love the way it tugs at my heart strings.

One word...Awesome. that was sweet and heartfelt...theres not enouph of that here. Keep it up _

I hope, that the "review" (?) of that Kambe...who? didn't make you sad. He must be a sick person in mind, in soul, in heart.

DO NOT GIVE UP, WRITE MORE!

I loved chapter two it was so sweet and the last two lines are awesome, I love the way you linked it to the movie there_

Lovely,

very "song of solomon"ish...

;-)

Outstanding poem. n_n

This chapter is interesting. Could we have more please.

That was so sweet, I thought it summed up Sarah's feelings very well. Can't wait to see more of your work_

I like it!