|Reviews for My last words|
| Wolfram von Bielefeld chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
I cried so friggin hard while reading this...oh man...
| BLANCintrigue chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
I HATE YOU!
well, dont freak out. I hate you coz' you make me cry. *cry*
anyway, such a sad but sweet story.
I can feel the overwelhming love from both of them toward each other.
you manage to picture both point of view wonderfully.
the end was so sweet that i almost faint.
it was so beautiful.
| Live Don't Just Exist chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
Wow, this was a great story! I loved it! 100 (where the heck is the percent button, oh here it is) %
| danteslacie chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
I really cried while reading this...
| radioactive edelweiss chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
Twas okay you killed them since you made them reunite at the end
| kimy38smiley chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
That was...so sweet...It made me cry. Your fic rocks! Write another! Write another!
| chocolatcoeur chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
| GoGothGirl chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
oh. my. god. I love it! I mean yea, its sad and all, but i love it! where's my teddy? i need a hug.
here's an idea: why dont you write something about Yuki & Wolf? i'd like to get to know Yuki.
| Sakura Petal Wings chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
That's sad that you killed Yuri and Wolfram!Besides that,it was great!
| nanashi chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
wonderful story. so sad yet beautiful. good job. i really enjoyed reading it.
| Leuv chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
I was touched while reading this fic.
So sentimental and sad.
Just want to give a few suggestions, when you change the point of view, maybe you can make it slightly different when it comes to Wolfram or Yuuri, I knew you've changed few part of it, and I like your insertion about each other feeling towards each other.
I hope you won't be offended by this review, I'm sorry if you don't like it.
Thank you very much for this lovely fic.
| dawnmm chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
for a deathfic i thought this was actually pretty good thanks for the story
| ayakausagui chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
What can I say?
OMG! I love it! Its sad, cute, beutiful, pasionally TT_TT I totally love it *-* Well ... I hope more of you Ja nee n_n
| Aya-tann chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
i like this. a little sad, but i like it. it's sad and sweet.
| Kuma chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
I heard about your first KKM fic in LiveJournal and decided to take a look. (since you stated that it'd be sad, and I like sad stories )
This is the point of Kuma-the reader:
Overally, the story is good, and really good for first time writting, though from the part" Yuuri's point of view" the story was a bit...washy, since you copied most of the dialogue from the first part, right? It would be better, I guess, if you focus much more on the description of Wolfram's change of emotions and more in "Yuuri's point of view", rather than repeating things that mentioned before in the first part, ok?
That was just my first impression when I read your story. I myself can't write such good fic as yours
Now to the point of Kuma- a Wolfram rabid girl: (brace urself! XD)
I must say that I couldn't believe my eyes when I read the part" Wolfram put his hand on his stomach and said their child..." and "Wolfram pregnant" and else since you put him as a real woman (which can never be true *_*), and it's just so over me when you let him die (NO NO NO RETURN HIM TO US! RETURN HIM TO ME!) Oh, I even thought that you would let the Maou reborn or something, but this is just too much (for me) T_T T_T However, passing away in that mysterious way, it's just like... the play of the fate, as if Yuki was the one who has been chosen to continue their will to send Wolfram away to the Maou when the time comes...something like that...I never good at getting my ideas across T_T But still this little part impressed me the most, plus the part when Yuuri said he would want Wolfram to be happy again (which is also my eternal wish)...
Apart from these little things, the whole story is awesome! If you can somehow fix them to the more proper way, it'd be the best!
I'm sorry if this review contained so many critism stuffs and I might sound like a boaster, I have the bad habit that I'd always turn out to be this way if someone said something unproper about Wolfram (at some limit) *_* But again, this story of yours is really really good generally! And I do look forward for more and more. If it hadn't had some specific details above I'd have been more than please and appreciated to have the right to post it on my Wolfram Shrine. T_T But alright, everybody has their own's taste and I never meant to criticize you or others' fics(even hardcore yaoi ones), though Im not really into this stuffs ;; sorry...
Plz write more! I have strong belief your next work would be even much better! One more thing to say: this story really has a breakthrough and extraordinary idea, which is extremly wonderful! I used to have a dream when I saw Wolfram and Yuuri in crystal coffins as well, and I did "scream till my throat went sore" -like Wolfram in your fic- in my dream. Is it just a coincidence, or fate, that I decided to read your story, while I've never tried to read KKM fanfics before, apart from the famous fics of Kiya sama and my friends...? Even if this's a coincidence, it's still a good concept to me
Thank you for reading this. Hope you could contact me sometimes through this email (or LJ still ok)