Reviews for Back I Go
Makurayami Ookami chapter 38 . 5/31
This was awesome. I read this over the course of two days. I loved it. Very well written. Something I’ve never read before so I really enjoyed it.
Makurayami Ookami chapter 19 . 5/30
Good. I’m glad his friends won’t try to interfere.
Makurayami Ookami chapter 7 . 5/30
Loved it. I’m glad the future Severus is happy about his new childhood.
Makurayami Ookami chapter 1 . 5/30
Good intro.
Saissa chapter 38 . 1/28
What an interesting and unusual angle for a time travel story.

Very nicely done and I love your solution in avoiding the paradoxes!
LadyClassy chapter 1 . 12/28/2017
I haven't read any of ur stories u update yet -sigh- got NP internet I'm using data
Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2017
Another moment: I noticed you often forget that Severus is half-blood and his father is muggle. It's one of little facts that you simply cannot change. It's like saying Tom Riddle was pure blood.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2017
Just a little note: when Severus was 10, there were no Diet Coke.
HoneyBear84 chapter 38 . 6/22/2017
Loved it
Honestly don't you two read chapter 38 . 5/26/2017
First of all, i liked the idea and you have plenty of interesting ideas :-)
Your time jumps were confusing, suddenly narcissi and Bella was a part of the story, you had not hinted at that earlier, so it was very sudden. Generally I do not think the timejumps worked well.
In the end, Harry was described as a grown man and he married the same woman from the past he has an 18 year old child with, yet we here nothing of young Harry who was born in the past, Ron and Hermione merged with their other selves if Harry did too he should not be older then Ron and Hermione, thus he would marry an old woman.
Lastly, you should check your grammar and spelling, basic things as "your" and "you're" switched.
Still a good story, I read it through to the end for a reason :-)
Xyori Nadeshiko chapter 38 . 4/13/2017
Etto... Me ubiese gustado que harry se quedara en el pasado... Bueno no importa ya que la historia me encanto!
vid123 chapter 38 . 2/21/2017
Thank god he survived! Nice fanfic!
Hime-chan Natsumi chapter 38 . 2/5/2017
Wow, una idea original. Me gustó en su mayoría. Lo que no me gustó es que Severus fuera hetero. Pensé que la mejor pareja para él era Remus. Aunque, Narcissa fue una buena elección. Me declaró culpable al pensar que ellos serían una buena pareja. Ya que Draco es muy aficionado a Severus. Soy feliz que Harry volviera, buen final.
Guest chapter 38 . 12/19/2016
Ha Dumbledore thrown in Azkaban! I like that twist. Everything turned out great and happy. Nice story.
Guest chapter 26 . 12/19/2016
Whoa, those are killer bomb shells! Crazy unexpected twists, Lol.
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