Reviews for Achilles' Heel
A Guest chapter 1 . 3/18/2015
HazySunray chapter 1 . 10/19/2014
Love this. Beautifully poignant. Well done.
thethreebroomsticks69 chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
I'm starting to think you're in cahoots with one of the actual Supernatural writers.
waterlily85 chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
I just reread this for the millionth time and something interesting accured to me. You had Dean tell Sammy not to ask John any more questions about Mary and in part one of the season two finale Dean said something quite similiar. I'm fairly certain you wrote this before that aired and if so, it looks like great minds think alike.
XxCrash.And.BurnXx chapter 1 . 11/1/2007
Aww, that was sad/cute!

I love Wee!chester Sammy. He's adorable. And you actually gave me an idea for one of my stories! Haha.


"'Course she is, Sammy," Dean mumbled sleepily. "She's always watching out for us. Now go to bed and stop talking."

"I whisp'ing," Sammy retorted.

That made me laugh outloud it was so cute! xD

nocturnal08 chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
Oh! I just love the babytalk and how sweet John is with his boys and I love Dean, too, at the end. Great job on this.
Ivy3 chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
Por John, you could really see how raw and painful it was and how difficult it can be to deal with Sammy's million questions. I liked Sammy and his innocent questions, trying to understand at such a tender age something so horrible. Having Dean there to protect them both, shielding both- it's a great dynamics you've got there.
ricksweet chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
Aw. I love Wee!chesters

I also love nice-John fics, so your story is awesome to read.

I'd write more, but I'm about ot go babysit, so sorry :(
CyberSupernatural chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
Jayme chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
I like this story. I have always liked John and wished that the show had dealt more with John and the boys childhood
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
A great John & Sam fic, however you might want to check for typos as you seem to be missing the r in t-shirt. Makes for quite a different impression.
Poaetpainter chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
"He'd lean up against the door, his ear to the wood, and listen to Dean's answers about death, hunting, and Mary."

Very bittersweet fic.

Great job.
beautiful dreamere chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
sammygirl1963 chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
Awesome oneshot! I love the way John struggled to answers Sammy's questions about his mom-and then for Dean to just spout out the answers as if nothing could be more true!
YOR chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
Perfection... I enjoyed this a lot. It seemed spot on.