Reviews for Before Checkers
Han Qing chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Interesting, in a reflective sort of way. I'm not sure if I'm supposed to take anything much deeper than his chess checkers preference, but it's sounds sort of symbolic.
Miss. Miyazawa chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
This was a very sweet piece. I love how vividly you painted Seto's emotions as well as the descriptive writing you used. The line that particularly stuck out to me was: 'Chatter from boys and girls smothered the clock’s mechanical ticking.' For some reason, I really liked it. It gave me the feeling of a warm room with content children. Good job. I'm favoring this. _
Gold Phoenix Selreena chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
It's different, not that I don't like that is! That was awesome.