Reviews for First
TenshiOnna chapter 2 . 9/28/2007
Thats really good. Very cute and... a good portrayal of their younger years. D'aww.
Not of Gold but of sin chapter 2 . 9/5/2007
I like this Story, please continue it, its hard to finad any good Alexander/Hephaistion's FICs anymore...
CameoCorbin chapter 2 . 8/15/2007
Trust No One chapter 2 . 7/19/2007
Fresh twist on a story that has been done so many times. But your prose flows beautifully and your Alexander and Hephaistion are modern yet timeless. Thanks for this.
malicious fairy chapter 2 . 7/18/2007
aww i love this. i have recently discovered the sweetness of alexander/hephaistion realtionship and this is one of the better ones ive found. beautiful job. please continue!
anathemawrites chapter 2 . 7/15/2007
Ahaha. I love that last little line. x3 Everything here was written very well, and I like your Hephaestion's POV. Keep it up!
angstman chapter 2 . 7/15/2007
Hi. I like your story and the period you chose to write about their first kiss and their first time physical relationship. Beautiful story.
Sushoo chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
aw, So sweet and sexy.

They are really adorable!

I hope to read more soon