|Reviews for The Trouble With Lying|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/29
I need more lilli and james...wright more
| elizaka chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
| artists chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
hmm. you seem rather conceited. just kidding, no worries. you are awesome. this was one of my favorite LJ one-shot-fics. I feed on jealous Lily's. :)
| Nonagall chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
:D love it
| Dandy352 chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
I LOVE IT! :D
| Nellie Lovett 'Barker chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Very cute story! Awesome job!
| ever afters chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
| Am1ra chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
Hey there, lannah! :)
I've read so many Lily/James-fics (working voluntarily for a German FF-site)that I sometimes just think "Oh my God, can't you think of something NEW just once?" Now that I'm running through my favorites list, I recognize that my favorites are all quite the same, too. That's why I really need to comment on your Oneshot:
Your story is somehow new, it's special. :)
It's not customary,touchy Lily the know-it-all and James, the boy that never ever stops asking, but just Lily and James. :) Due to her crush on James and the sweet squiecking-thing, Lily is vulnerable and not just "Miss Perfect".
Moreover I simply like your writing style. :)You succeed in interlacing a joke every few lines, so reading never gets boring.
I have the impression that you manage a good mean in between too colloquial ("Urg, what fucking dumbass put his togs here, huh?" :D) and too artificial language("James, would you please be quiet!"). Hmm, one could think that I can't judge that as I'm no native speaker, but I know that both extremes exist and that I really don't like them. *grin*
So, thanks for this special Oneshot. :) I guess I'll read through your other stories tomorrow, too. :)
| Loves to read books chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
your story is amazing.
| Silver dagger chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
AWWWWWW! that was cute! I like how she was like All squeky when she lied
| showstopper92 chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
this was so cute! well done :)
| Lily-Evans-James-Potter chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
Longer please? It was really very good and I did not want it to end. Maybe start writing an actual story? I love your work.
| 4LJ chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
hmm...u write the best stories.
best part: where they argue so much, it's almost like foreplay
| quill.is.mightier chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
It was very cute!
| Ellie49 chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it!