|Reviews for The Basics of Alchemy|
| angel.yang92 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
I loved it :D good work!
| Skippy the Hobolo chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
im still celebratingXD
| Netta Sloan chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
Interesting story. I liked your take on Lin asking for Winry's hand in marriage. I hadn't looked at it like he was serious. Very nice. (I thought he did it to irritate Ed and Ranfan was used to him doing that sort of thing to people.)
| S J Smith-Evil Little Dog chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
| AluraEmbrey chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
Very nice. As I've said before, I dont know mangaverse, but I enjoyed it all the same!
And I'm starting to think we FMA fans like celebrating. We just make special days for all our characters and ideas. First Royai now Xing. lol
| Dailenna chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
A little inconsistancy in the start: the first paragraph starts counting with numbers, then with placings (one, then second as opposed to one, then two, or first, then second). Try to keep it one or the other :)
Aww! "A third example was when he made everyone uncomfortable by asking Winry to be his wife—he had to deal with being uncomfortable with RanFan’s silence later that night." Poor Ran-Fan! ;_;
In the small paragraph, that sort of vein is the one that blood goes through. You mean 'vain' :)
Good work! And Happy Xing Celebration Day, again! :D