I wish you had continued this but its so old I doubt it ever will be it was a good story though

For all those who want a good place to stop ch 9 is good, it won’t leave you hanging. This is so much fun to read, don’t pass it up!

I would love it if you would finish this! It's one of my favorites to read, and it would be really cool to get the ending. )

Great story! I have a feeling that the autobot would like that song: American AuthorsI'm Born To Run
'cause that's what he reminds me of

Huh last updated in 2008...
It’s 2018 why have you not updated in 10 years?
Please mark this as abandoned or something.

Wow, just wow. For the rather small number of chapters, the story is wonderful. Nice work this is a great read [thumbsup] [Clapping]

Congratulations! You havcan actually created OCs I like! And the story is fabulous. I really hope you continue

Noooooooo! Ppease dont kill me like this. Please. Its s beautiful! I want to cry so bad. Its amazing.

I sincerely hope this story is not dead like you promised, because it's just getting to the good part! I actually really liked Whiplash and Nic's characters. They don't feel like OCs at all, they feel like canon characters. You did a very good job! And the plot is very interesting. Now that Soundwave has appeared, what will happen next? I love the chase scenes, they are really desperate to get away from Decepticons huh? Kinda felt bad when Whiplash finally realized that he had been running away from Bumblebee. Whiplash's story is very sad and tragic, hope he finds companionship in Nic soon. That brief mention of Jazz tugged at my heart, I still can't accept how easily he died. Hope you update this soon! This is a very wonderful story!

Loved the story. I really hope you get around to finishing it at some point.

I just binge-read this entire thing and I applaud you! This is an incredible rollercoaster ride! I love Nic! She's courageous and kind and awesome! I love Whiplash! I love everything about this fic!

I'm going to favourite this and follow it on the off-chance that you come back to it, even though it's 2016. Keep it up, TLRH! I'm ready when you are! :)

Sorry, but I have to do this: Let's Get Ready To Rumble! XP

Apologies, but seriously, this is great and I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Can't wait to read the rest.

uh oh, but wow! this is impressive stuff as I have probably already said- can't fully remember. Anyway, nice work and I love how you use the right terminology throughout. Awesome!

I know that this was last updated 2008 but I'm willing to hope that someday we'll see more of Nic and Whiplash, because your story is amazing!

I NEARLY DIED WHEN YOU WROTE "ITS TIME TO GO HOME"
DONT DO THAATTTTTTT I ALMOST SCREAMED NOO that wouldve been a hell of a miscommunication to overcome ; -;
buT how nic got a job as drift-compatible w whippy was so good (rip him, optimus! rip simmons to shreds!) thank u sm