|Reviews for Faultlines|
| spacecavy chapter 15 . 3/7
This was easily the best romance I've ever read. It just felt so real. Actually, it reminded me of my relationship with my husband, and why I love him so much. I really liked how you wrote everyone, especially Hermione's parents. The books didn't give you much to go on, and most fan fiction makes them a bit one-dimensional. You did such a good job.
| spacecavy chapter 1 . 2/28
Oh my gosh this is wonderful! Made me tear up a bit. It's incredibly mature for the genre.
| Vento-del-Sud chapter 15 . 2/27
This is the most wonderful angst \ romance I've ever read! Deep and sophisticated, but funny and - oh! - sweet and sincere. The author has done a great, great job!
| melove167 chapter 15 . 2/8
I've been procrastinating on reading this story for years now. I came across it on many favorite listsand found the plot quite interesting but still it took me so long to finally click and read this. And honestly I can say this was a great story. It was incredibly frustrating at times but everything worked our perfectly in the end. Absolutely loved this final chapter. I'm grateful that finally got the chance to read this. Great Job!
| LeftyDoGooder chapter 15 . 2/1
Right, I'm sorry I've not reviewed before (I got to the last chapter of Biscuits before I found out it was abandoned, so I was a bit miffed about that), but I wanted to get to the end before writing anything.
Your writing is brilliant. I actually feel - and have felt all day actually - sad with Ron and Hermione. Your version of Hermione is a bit of a shouty act-now-think-later idiot, but it felt very true to the books. I won't pretend it's perfect, I didn't like the fact that Fred was still alive... I love Fred, but he died, and it made the story a bit of a wish fulfilment, but then I suppose that's the point of fan fic.
I'm going to go read your other fics now. I'm not a regular reviewer, more of a lurker, but I had to tell you how much I enjoyed your story (and I would love you forever if you went back to Biscuits :) )
| Ulysses.se chapter 1 . 1/20
Going through marriage breakup. But read this for years before... Still love it. Still hope...
| ladyphlogiston chapter 15 . 1/9
This was excellent! Really good depiction of a real-life couple. My husband and I have been together for even longer than RonandHermione (mutual crushes when we were ten) and you did an excellent job with the sense of knowing and connectedness that gives.
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/6
I meant ch. 11!
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/6
And I meant ch. 11!
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/6
Okay so I know I'm reading this like 6 years late, and I doubt you even check your reviews anymore, but I need to express how cleanly you have ripped my heart out of my chest with this chapter. Thank you.
| Lettie M chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
Oh, I had to send a review after I read that note on your profile. Ha.
I'm very happy to say this is my very first HP fanfic. I searched fanfics R/Hr. with the most reviews and this turn up.
I love it, really. Is real. And Fred is alive, so thats always great. I like that they have real human problems, not just the wizard world is ending. They are finding themself. I really can relate to that.
You are a very persuasive person.
| waspsbewaremywrathrawr chapter 4 . 9/27/2013
YAY! I DON'T FEEL SAD ANYMORE! I mean that in the nicest way possible. Your writing was so brilliant that I felt what they felt. So, congrats!
| AshleytheMuggle chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
This is my second time reading this fic so I figured I owed you a review by now.
Let me just say wow and more wow. I love HP and I love Romione even more, I just discovered they even had fanfic for it this summer. After reading many stories I came across yours and was HOOKED. After reading it the first time I then read Biscuits and Ginger Idiot, loved those too. Faultlines though is really special. I found myself laughing, crying and smiling. I even find myself now wondering how did that first date go?
There were scenes that stuck out to me, like Hermione stating Ron's laugh could stop wars. I'm tearing up now just thinking about it, it's small stuff like that that makes this story so special and real. So many fic writers get caught up in the fluff that there is no real story. That can't be said here. What Ron and Hermione have is so unique you can't help but root for them. I'd love to read more on romione from you. Maybe even tap into Harry and Ginny... I just love your style. You should send this to J.K. she'd adore it. Love from Texas mate :)
| vaishu93 chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
I loved ur story hav read it tons of time...can u write RON's pov of d same one...? am dying 4 it!
| Craftsman chapter 15 . 8/13/2013
This was beautiful and heartbreaking. I wanted to shake both of them so many times! If I've learned anything in eighteen years of marriage, it's that not everything I think needs to be said out loud, but they've obviously not figured that out yet. You've done a fabulous job of showing their relationship, their faults, and their issues. Thanks for