|Reviews for Auctions And Dignity|
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 21 . 10/25
Interesting ending. It does set the sequel up a bit.
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 19 . 10/25
Lowering the wards was a selfish decision Dumbledore made. I'm disappointed in that professor.
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 17 . 10/24
If Draco was having trouble with Hermione hearing him out then why not use the auction spell to his advantage?
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 16 . 10/24
Neville? But why?
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 10 . 10/24
OMG for those two kisses!
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 2 . 10/23
Hermione seemed to be getting along with Blaise quite nicely. I like it.
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 1 . 10/23
Why auction only the girls? That seems unfair.
When Hermione relaxes, she is more fun.
| narutocraxygirl107 chapter 2 . 1/13
Blaise is black...he is not toned
| clumsydolphin chapter 18 . 9/11/2014
I absolutely love this story wholeheartedly but I will be extremely honest with you here in this review. I have almost quit reading this story in frustration every other chapter. It is extraordinarily distracting to be reading a great story and in the middle of a chapter there is an author's note. I know you have fun writing and it comes across very well in the story but pointing out your puns and humor this way is off putting. If the story is truly humorous it will come across to the readers without you telling them that. And the funny thing is, it's extremely fun and funny so I don't understand why you feel the need to point it out. I am a writer too so I want to give you just a tiny bit of advice. Learning how to control your emotions while trying to add them into a character is very difficult and a fine line to walk, so try to reign in the giddiness a bit in the future.
Also something that ticks me off and is a pet peeve I've heard time and time again; when writers use author notes to thank reviewers. What it does is pad your word count and makes readers think that your story is actually much longer than it is, which then makes you feel cheated and lied to. I did this too when I initially started writing fan fiction simply because I was a touch giddy and so grateful anyone took the time to review. So my way of reigning it in was to maybe pick two or three reviews and answer that way, this way it wasn't padded so much and didn't upset readers. Eventually I went back and edited all those review answers out of the notes and quit doing it altogether when I started getting complaints and suggestions like I'm now passing on to you.
Being completely honest with you, even as a writer myself I don't often review. It's a horrible habit I know, but the point is; I love your story and writing so much that I am taking the time to give you advice about the things I've learned over the years so that you can grow as a fan fiction writer. You have an amazing way of crafting a story and if I didn't love it so much I wouldn't have taken the time to tell you all of this. So please don't think of this as a big negative flame review, it's not meant that way. I hope to continue reading many more stories from you!
| clumsydolphin chapter 2 . 9/11/2014
I love the way you've written Hermione so far and the interaction between her and Blaise is perfect.
| furface294 chapter 21 . 6/30/2014
WHAT IN HADES DO YOU CALL THIS ? halfway through a story you say it is complete! are you drunk or demented? talk abut the wrong way to wrote a finish to a story, up until the last chapter I was enjoying it and then you leave us with this ? up until the last chapter it was a really good story, very enjoyable, and then... then... you ruined my entire enjoyment of this story by the last 2 chapters, 20 and 21.
| marthapreston4 chapter 7 . 3/25/2014
Okay confused Sirus came back from the dead why is there more about him and harry in here if my only family member came back from the dead I would spend all my time with them
| marthapreston4 chapter 6 . 3/25/2014
I like story kind of but the auction doesnt even happen for the first few chapters. There are some confusing love triangles and I am not sure it the story is about Hermione/draco mione/blaise
tonk/snape or mione./sirius
| Guest chapter 20 . 5/1/2013
WHAT THE FUCK WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY WHHHHYYYYYY?! Okay no that I got that over with WHAT THE HELL HAPPENS I FEEL LIKE I JUST READ AN IMPERIAL AFFLICTION IR SOMETHING CAUSE THIS AIN'T FINISHED I MEAN IS HE DEAD LIKE WAS THAT A DEAD PERSON TWITCH AND WHAT HAPPENED WITH TONKS AND WHEN WILL RON WAKE UP OH WHAT ABOUT BLAISE I KNOW GINNY DIDN'T GET A LETTER BUT STILL!?
| Divergent-Slytherin-Victor chapter 18 . 4/30/2013
HAHAHAHA "I LOVE HAVING SEX WITH BOYS – GINNY, ARE YOU SURE THESE ARE THE RIGHT WORDS?" YES BLAISE THAT'S PERFECT