|Reviews for Auctions And Dignity|
| X Mika-Chan X chapter 21 . 6/9
To be honest you shouldn't care what anyone thinks of your story as long as you had fun writing it so I'm glad your sister gave you a pep talk about it. Though some people are probably upset because when they pick to read Romance/Humor stories they usually end happily.
| 4thkage chapter 20 . 3/31
| 4thkage chapter 16 . 3/31
| 4thkage chapter 13 . 3/31
who's the figure?
| jojo chapter 20 . 2/16
I liked it a lot
THanks for writing. Can u pls write a granger fanfiction for dramione? your writing is soo good plus ive read all the other granger family reunions
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 21 . 10/25/2015
Interesting ending. It does set the sequel up a bit.
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 19 . 10/25/2015
Lowering the wards was a selfish decision Dumbledore made. I'm disappointed in that professor.
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 17 . 10/24/2015
If Draco was having trouble with Hermione hearing him out then why not use the auction spell to his advantage?
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 16 . 10/24/2015
Neville? But why?
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 10 . 10/24/2015
OMG for those two kisses!
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 2 . 10/23/2015
Hermione seemed to be getting along with Blaise quite nicely. I like it.
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 1 . 10/23/2015
Why auction only the girls? That seems unfair.
When Hermione relaxes, she is more fun.
| narutocraxygirl107 chapter 2 . 1/13/2015
Blaise is black...he is not toned
| clumsydolphin chapter 18 . 9/11/2014
I absolutely love this story wholeheartedly but I will be extremely honest with you here in this review. I have almost quit reading this story in frustration every other chapter. It is extraordinarily distracting to be reading a great story and in the middle of a chapter there is an author's note. I know you have fun writing and it comes across very well in the story but pointing out your puns and humor this way is off putting. If the story is truly humorous it will come across to the readers without you telling them that. And the funny thing is, it's extremely fun and funny so I don't understand why you feel the need to point it out. I am a writer too so I want to give you just a tiny bit of advice. Learning how to control your emotions while trying to add them into a character is very difficult and a fine line to walk, so try to reign in the giddiness a bit in the future.
Also something that ticks me off and is a pet peeve I've heard time and time again; when writers use author notes to thank reviewers. What it does is pad your word count and makes readers think that your story is actually much longer than it is, which then makes you feel cheated and lied to. I did this too when I initially started writing fan fiction simply because I was a touch giddy and so grateful anyone took the time to review. So my way of reigning it in was to maybe pick two or three reviews and answer that way, this way it wasn't padded so much and didn't upset readers. Eventually I went back and edited all those review answers out of the notes and quit doing it altogether when I started getting complaints and suggestions like I'm now passing on to you.
Being completely honest with you, even as a writer myself I don't often review. It's a horrible habit I know, but the point is; I love your story and writing so much that I am taking the time to give you advice about the things I've learned over the years so that you can grow as a fan fiction writer. You have an amazing way of crafting a story and if I didn't love it so much I wouldn't have taken the time to tell you all of this. So please don't think of this as a big negative flame review, it's not meant that way. I hope to continue reading many more stories from you!
| clumsydolphin chapter 2 . 9/11/2014
I love the way you've written Hermione so far and the interaction between her and Blaise is perfect.