Reviews for Shatter
The Infernal Lady chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
You're amazing, making such a short story so full of something – reaching out for feeling? - and yet so empty. And let's not forget the smut. I really enjoyed it.
kurosora1984 chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
O.o OMG. YOU WERE AWESOME BEFORE I KNEW WHAT AWESOME WAS. (Checked the date on this one, lol.) I WAS...I WAS WATCHING SEMI-LAME ANIME AND HAD NEVER HEARD OF KINGDOM HEARTS AND WAS ONLY DISCOVERING YAOI MANGA (or had discovered it...within the past year, as of July 07) AND HERE YOU WERE, MAKING THESE AMAZING BOYS HAVE AN AMAZING RUT AGAINST A /WALL/.

YOU. WIN.

Also, LMAO "in a move of unparalleled stupidity" IN THE RO0O0O0OM THE MEETING ROOM LMAO OH GODS. DAMN, THEY ARE /ANIMALS/. I. LOVE. IT. 8D 8D 8D

The fact that you still love them after so long gives me hope. Because, while I know I'm not a teenager on a random kick, and I DO think I'll be a fangirl for a long time, sometimes...I confess I doubt. YOU GIVE ME HOPE AND FAITH AGAIN.

AND SMUT. YOU GIVE ME SMUT. I LOVE YOU. XD XD XD
slewy chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
Holy. Crap. Truly amazing. I love every piece of yours that I've read. Just thought you should know how highly I regard your work, even though I don't review much. Thanks so much for sharing it!
Silent chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
How do you do this? Something so short and simple and I just can't stop reading. And I've read it before.

You're awesome.
Crazy Jay Blue chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
Amazing, this is so sexy and so scary, and empty and sad. It makes me think, and it really sets the somber pace for the half-relationship between Roxas and Axel. It's beautiful. Empty, and wonderfully written.
Windsong chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
That was incredibly hot, but also *so* passionate and...you really captured a kind of breathless, gasping sensation, of reaching out for something but not quite getting there, a sense of emptiness and desperation and loss. And all in such a short time!

You're just amazing.
jacefacexx chapter 1 . 9/20/2007
xD i bet your grandma would have a panic attack followed by a heart attack reading this :)
SeldomFollowIt chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
aww that was a little sad but really hot :]
1066716 chapter 1 . 8/9/2007
Wow. I really don't even know what to say about this one! It's...I don't know if it's supposed to be lighthearted, but that was the feeling I got. And there's a feeling of tension here, but also of hope and.../wow/. You do such an amazing job of weaving emotion into your writing, and it really comes through here. And it's strange because this is, in essence, a smut piece, but there's such emotion here! The danger Roxas feels in what they do, screwing all over the place, thinking that maybe they actually /want/ to get caught...gah! You've made me speechless, I really don't know what to say!

I /will/ say, though that those last two lines made me grin. Wonderful.

-Dual
hieisomething chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
aw hhehe that was nice haha but kinda sad that they dont even talk to each other afterwards...heheh -
darkmouse jumu chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
I love it! Well written and composed (they are different, I'm learning) as always. You're a ninja, I'm convinced, to pull off editing porn (hot, sweaty, sexy, wonderful porn) on your family's computer. Lots of Start Button M, I'm sure, and heartracing close calls.

I love more than anything that they have DONE Castle Oblivion and The World That Never Was in a different way every time it comes up. I was laughing in spite of their sorrowful situation just imagining them in other organization members rooms. A series of close calls written during a series of close calls. dear god what are you doing to my brain...?

i love it. -dmjumu
kuriqa chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
ah! joygasm! hurrah for akuroku! keep it coming girly!

k
Luna Lovegood1 chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
Lord have mercy child! *fans self* hehehe. this makes up for the teasing in among friends. It was sad yeah, but sensual and intense. Just like their relationship is. I wish they can really feel, they totally got short-handed in the games :(. oh well. anywho. wonderful delicious work ;) loved it!
raikouinazuma chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
I...don't really know what to say very angsty and yet it had that romantic spark to it;I have to say I love fics like this for some reason they appeal to me more than fics that are all happyish with no kind of angst, , this was great loved it.
AlphaOmegaPsi chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
I have no words for how much I loved this. Bravo.
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