|Reviews for A Father's Love|
| Hannalikescats chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
Pleasant fic of a very underpreciated fandom. Could be a tiny bit more fluid, as at times Gunbard's being poetic and serious, then all of a sudden he's being light-hearted. The best example is when he's listing the things he watched Yucie do first-hand, but then adds "technically I didn't because I found her" (paraphrased). It makes him sound a bit too bitter.
Overall it's a very touching story 3
| coolbound chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
I missed watching Petite Princess Yucie.
| Veritas Found chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
. . .! PPY fic! Omf, you've no idea how happy you've made me. The fandom's so under-appreciated, and now we've got more authors! And not just that, but it's an Arc x Yucie fic! I am squeeing so loud right now.
"I Asked my self that question when I saw you two together for the first time, it really was only a matter of time and coaching him." - I laughed so hard at that. 'Coaching' is right, the poor guy! xD
Overall you got Gunberd's voice very well; there were a bit grammar/flow issues, and the whole "I loved her first" thing did get a bit repetitive (but I can understand that, given the nature of the songfic). Overall, though, I loved this. Fab job, hun. D
| Anime Pink Princess chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
that was a very good poem. "Two thumbs up!"