Meiyami chapter 10 . 10/26/2012
do you come back to write?
patito chapter 10 . 12/2/2010
I love it! Keep going!
Chaosmaiden07 chapter 10 . 6/5/2009
Not bad. I always wondered if Karlos would propose to sahra this way. good job.
Pokepal Karai Natsume chapter 10 . 6/4/2009
Awesome Chapter. So sweet how Kalos gives Sarah the ring. And the part with Fool was funny as well. 3 I hope to read more of this soon!
Pokepal Karai Natsume chapter 9 . 5/24/2009
Personally, I wouldn't have gotten rid of Ken, but otherwise I think you did awesome. Still, there's more to it, isnt' there? If there is then please update!
souless wanderer chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
ok, your grammar needs a lot of work. I couldn't concentrate on the plot because of it. It confused me too.
Micathloren chapter 8 . 9/29/2007
It's okay!

I like the chapter! So nice and touching! Hehe... Update soon *waves a banner with 'Congratulations' sign and singing Cliff Richard's 'Congratulations'*
Micathloren chapter 7 . 8/21/2007
Wow! Update, Update, UPDATE! The chapter is so NICE! Please continue! _
Chaosmaiden07 chapter 7 . 8/7/2007
Very nice, this place needs more Leon/Sora stories. Update please!
hydrixze chapter 6 . 7/23/2007
well I think It's gonna be a long story better read the next chapter... though it's having plenty of grammatical error well, I think it's good.. pls update soon..