Reviews for Message in a Bottle
MuggleCreator chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Interesting. This confuses me slightly, but is very good. Did Severus adapt the priori spell – the shadows only spoke in GoF because of the twin cores connection, I thought.
riverrat chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
Oooh, NICE!
I like that a lot.
BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
A great story. Very well written.
Emily Waters chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
What a punchline! Yes!
RebeccaRoy chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Short and intense.
whitehound chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
Please ignore this peculiar review. This is just me testing out how the

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HiddenPortrait chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
this idea would be really good expanaded!
Chemical Ghost chapter 1 . 7/10/2007

Question is, what would ghost Albus do? And does that matter?

Quite a bit of power for 100 words, but then, that's what a good drabble is.
tearsofphoenix chapter 1 . 7/9/2007

I loved the idea by Red Hen and I love this scene. There are all the words needed and a powerful end:

"I will".

This is such a great possibility... and the gesture by Tom to the sky reminds the scene on the US cover of DH, in this drabble, so... who knows?

Very, very good
duj chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
Good work, but I think you could have fitted the explanation into the drabble if you'd cut out "Did you think to oppose me?" and replaced "the special one" with "the one he'd used that fatal night" or, perhaps, "the one that had felled his friend" . Then you could have added "Priori Incantato" after "commanding the wood".
Mooncat4 chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
Wow, how cool is that? Nicely done, ma'am. Thank you, Mooncat
cecelle chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
I like that idea - even if Albus can't do magic in that form, he can still provide a distraction or visual barrier, the way the five figures from Voldemort's wand do, giving Snape time to do his worst with that second wand...
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
I _like_ this idea. His ghost would be a lot more powerful than say, Lily or James.

Neat idea!
Catherine Cook chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
And he most certainly will!
Ysilme chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
Whew - what a hell of a drabble! I had to read it three times and now hope I got it right... intriguing, really intriguing, and what a good idea this is!

Congratultations on this marvellous piece of work, so nicely written!

What puzzles me is whether it's the Snape of "lost and found" or not...