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Guest chapter 2 . 9/12/2014
HI /\ /\
tumie.yungsmith chapter 2 . 8/29/2014
okay that was short but the eyes they seek for more words gimme more!
SoundScream chapter 14 . 8/22/2014
Explicit it..!
SoundScream chapter 18 . 8/21/2014
Guest chapter 2 . 6/22/2014
*Sakura's mom takes Sakura away*
Me: No! Don't take her away!
*Gaara says "Mine."
Me: Shit! Take her away!
Kylie Bearden chapter 18 . 2/23/2014
OMG wow that was amazing I am a huge Naruto fan and that was better than the episodes I loved it you have a true talent
Kylie Bearden chapter 14 . 2/23/2014
What what I have no words for this it is amazing but at the same time shameful
Kylie Bearden chapter 9 . 2/23/2014
OMG! this is what should have happened in tht episode
Kylie Bearden chapter 5 . 2/23/2014
I love it but why dose he keep saying mate it is cool yet kinda creepy
Kylie Bearden chapter 2 . 2/23/2014
This is a super cool story so far keep
Up the good work
Natasha chapter 6 . 2/9/2014
No need to comment. AWSOME.
Natasha chapter 5 . 2/9/2014
Dark, sexy, and totally awesome.
Natasha chapter 4 . 2/9/2014
Very nice touchy passionate and a little funny in one like it.
Natasha chapter 3 . 2/9/2014
Now that is a funny ending. I LIKE IT!
Natasha chapter 2 . 2/9/2014
sounds like you have a good base going just make it longer. Like put in things like sakuras walk to the and her deciding to make the braclet and maybe say she had to try so many times to make just so you can have a few intimate details in there and make the story longer but it is good not trying to be mean just some friendly sugestions if you want o use them.
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