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Kylie Bearden chapter 5 . 2/23/2014
I love it but why dose he keep saying mate it is cool yet kinda creepy
Kylie Bearden chapter 2 . 2/23/2014
This is a super cool story so far keep
Up the good work
Natasha chapter 6 . 2/9/2014
No need to comment. AWSOME.
Natasha chapter 5 . 2/9/2014
Dark, sexy, and totally awesome.
Natasha chapter 4 . 2/9/2014
Very nice touchy passionate and a little funny in one like it.
Natasha chapter 3 . 2/9/2014
Now that is a funny ending. I LIKE IT!
Natasha chapter 2 . 2/9/2014
sounds like you have a good base going just make it longer. Like put in things like sakuras walk to the and her deciding to make the braclet and maybe say she had to try so many times to make just so you can have a few intimate details in there and make the story longer but it is good not trying to be mean just some friendly sugestions if you want o use them.
Allora22701 chapter 18 . 12/30/2013
Awesome ending!
Lillichan chapter 2 . 12/29/2013
love it hohoho
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO chapter 18 . 11/14/2013
pppllllleeeeaaaassseeee dont... dont please dont let the story be over! Please continue, smh gahh.. no dont do that.. please continue.. ive been searching for so long and you appeared with this story.. please continue, my email is , please message me whenyou wanna tell me it 's started again.
otaku chapter 18 . 10/19/2013
omg such a gripping story ! make a new one on the shippuden !
Porcalein chapter 18 . 10/13/2013
that...sucks i mean seriously wth the story works in the beginning but after all the hits, demands, abuse and rape you CAN'T END IT LIKE THIS. maybe its only my opinion but that story and ending can go together.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/10/2013
i like it
CrystalBud chapter 18 . 7/28/2013
yay, their together, sort of :D
BillyBobBoo chapter 18 . 7/13/2013
THE END my ass i want more its no enough! ;-(
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