|Reviews for The Last Kryptonian|
| sportytc chapter 5 . 1/14
Hi just wondering if you were going to finish this story of and if so would you please contunue on with is as i would love to read more.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/9
can you tell us readers how chloe is going to react to the news about SG1?
| jon chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
I like your story line and the mash up you have chosen. Your Clark seems a bit on the wordy side but your painting pictures with words so that a real small thing to be complaining about. I really like how you got Lana and Clark back together, good job! I just recently watched some episodes from the superman TV show from the fifties, their charatizations were way out there even far off from the comic version almost a bad parody of the original story line. I like your version of Smallville it would be real cool if you added more chapters to the story line. There are all sorts of way you can continue the plot line just don't jam too much in a chapter like one villain per chapter or reveal per chapter. Keep up the good work!
| MBScavenger1498 chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
Hm... This is pretty good, definitely better than most of the stuff on this site. Still, I fell like your sentences and dialogue are a bit long-winded. Clark especially seems to talk too much. Unless he's extremely uncomfortable, he tends to be direct and not extremely talkative. Not to say people shouldn't talk at all, I just think a lot of the dialogue was a bit redundant.
That's not to say I don't like the story, it's an interesting concept and even having never really watched the show itself, this has me interested in Stargate.
More commentary as I read,
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/15/2013
Please continue to post this story, it is a great story! are you going to bring in the other types of Kryptonite and the other super heroes, like Flash, Green Arrow, Fish-stick (Aquaman), and cyborg?
| bandgsecurtiyaw chapter 5 . 8/19/2013
Wonderful story I do hope against all likely hood that you continue it.
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/29/2013
More chapters for The Last Kryptonian now pleas!
| kavell chapter 5 . 7/5/2013
Are you going to finish this story?
| Ravenmore45 chapter 5 . 5/19/2013
This sucks. Delete this piece of shit. Retard
| Deiron Lionheart chapter 5 . 4/4/2013
Quite a story here? When is next update for this?
| edboy4926 chapter 5 . 2/8/2013
Best Smallville/SG-1 crossover I have found
Please, please continue
| josiah275 chapter 5 . 12/18/2012
hurry up with the next part!111 pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeease :P
| Hidolfr chapter 5 . 7/13/2012
Great story and nicely combining the two series cant wait for more
| MythsterBlack chapter 5 . 3/31/2012
Good story. I do hope you will get back to it soon? The only thing it might need is Harry Potter in there some where to add even more secrecy and another partner on the side of good. *grins* Hint hint.
Please write more soon ok?
| puma1sunfire chapter 5 . 1/25/2012
WOW! I could so see this crossover working or something similar after I read through this one. Great story! Was hoping for more since it went so well. Thanks for writing this one though