Reviews for Never Imagined
hamster1231 chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
should keep going and make it tie in with Vegas 2 with Bishop.
SandyCaesar chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
Hey, an update to the TC section! All right, this was solid throughout, though I don't think Walter would call Logan "mate" that often, even though he's British. There were two types of grammar mistakes I spotted:

One, interrupted quotes should end with a comma, not a period.

Ex: "Hey guys(COMMA)" greeted the pilot. "Got here on the operation after hearing what happened to Brody."

And two, I believe the word's "yeah", not "yea". "Yea" is pronounced "yay"; just thought you should know.