aww. so cute. i'm glad you got the sequel up already )

Great chapter! Interesting, reading Mitchum and Logan fighting in Catherine's Foundation I was wondering how Sophie didn't heard that and now I see you didn't just drop it, which I find a perfect job of continuity! :)

Another great chapter! I was excited to see that Sophie will be Rory's flower girl. Now it just leaves who she'll choose for her maid of honor. You write Sophie so well, even though she's nine and very mature, she still talks and acts like someone her age. And Rory was true to character too with her rambling. The end was great-

"Society had not been kind to Rory Hayden. Nor had the Huntzbergers and if it ever happened again, Logan was going to end it. Period." I love protective Logan! Please update soon! :)

I realy enjoyed it!

i personally think that is a great prestent. lol. thanks for the update. you are a aamazing writer. update as soon as posible

*Gilmore7*

Intense but wonderful!

See, not that I'm complaining, but if you start spoiling us again with the daily updates, what's going to happen when you go two or three days without posting anything? I'm just saying... the readers will rebel, server will crash, and there will be rioting in the e-streets. With that being said, yay! An Update!

Sophie is just too precious for words. She's so much like Rory, she's so mature, but she's still just a nine-year-old girl. I think you made her the perfect age. One of my biggest pet peeves (heh, I have alot of them, I know) is when a child is introduced into the fold, and then is given the personality and the language skills of a twenty-something. That's not the case here though. Sure, Sophie's mature for a nine-year-old, but given her circumstance, of course she is, but she still acts her age.

Any humanity I said you gave Shira in the first chapter? I take it all back. I cannot stand the woman. I laughed at Lacey's feedback comparison of her to Cruella DeVille, it's so true!

The conversation between Rory and Sophie, from beginning to end, was wonderful to read and I'm glad to see that Rory decided to fill her in about the Hartford Elite and Rory's part/non-part in it.

This little bit of dialogue? "“I called Finn. Sometimes her adoration for that man terrifies me,” Rory answered. “But I digress. I walk into my office this afternoon and Sophie’s doing homework on my office floor. Now that I look back on it I’m not sure which is more disturbing that she was there or that she was voluntarily working on a carpet which has definitely seen more hygienic days…”" was classic Rory-babble, and again, I could picture Alexis saying the words.

Logan's immediate protection of Sophie and her feelings, and the rage he felt towards his family at the thought of them hurting her? Absolutely adorable. No other words seem to fit.

And then I get to read this delicious last bit:Society had not been kind to Rory Hayden. Nor had the Huntzbergers and if it ever happened again, Logan was going to end it.

Period.

I hate to quote Paris Hilton, I really really do, but um yeah... that's just hot. Protective Logan is someone I want in my life!

Some people are just so mean and horrible. Why do the Huntzbergers have to be so condescending and evil? Argh! I hate them. Well, not Honor, or Logan, or Elias. So I guess I just hate Mitchum and Shira, though truthfully, Mitchum has moments when I sort of like him and he's not completely and utterly horrible. Those moments tend to be few and far between but they are there. Shira though, in this story at least, she's just the ultimate evil. She's Cruella Deville, the Wicked Witch of the West, and the Big Bad Wolf all rolled into one:

"My what big eyes you have." the innocent child says.

"All the better to get you and your little dog too so that I can make my extremely rare and expensive fur coat with. I will not be stopped!" the evil Shira Huntzberger replies.

Ugh. I hate her... But I really love your story :D Keep the updates coming!

Yay another chapter! I loved the drama and the fact that Logan got upset over what his father said it shows that logan loves sophie like his own as does rory! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Excellent chapter, i actually got married in May cool. I really like how they treat sophie like their daughter instead of rory's daughter, its cute. Update soon!

Love the story

Fabulous sequel so far

love it

update soon!

Great new chapter! Love that they now have their wedding date! Poor Sophie! Will Logan be adopting her as well when they marry? Can't wait to read more, and especially wanting to find out how the family dinner goes with all the troops present!

It's great. I can't really say too much more...:)

brit

great second chapter. love all the Rogan interactions. I wonder how the families, especially the Gilmores going to react to the news. Looking forward to more.

two in one day! you are a godsend. I so can't wait for the rest of the story because so far its great especially this chapter. I love Sophie in this and the aftermath with Logan. can't wait for the dinner in hell. and hopefully there is a conversation between logan and soph because I love their interaction.

update soon please. though two in one day so not complaining. Thanks!