Reviews for Fair Game
amoredward chapter 9 . 9/3/2007
Oh gosh. So many good parts that I won't begin to quote them. Umm...well I'm going to read the next chapter! It's just too good to resist!

Fabulous work, by the way!

amoredward chapter 8 . 9/3/2007
Oh, the anticipation of something happening! It is hard to stop and review!

But this might be one of my favorite lines from all fanfiction:

"She'd corrupted me — I was seeing innuendos everywhere."

*laughing hysterically* So so good!

And also when Edward is thinking "Focus" that was very funny. I love how you write this-Edward trying to resist any physical temptation. If I was in a reverse situation (meaning a guy like Edward was going after me) I wouldn't have enough self-control to last me five minutes!

I'm off to read more! Yay!

amoredward chapter 7 . 9/3/2007
Well, let me breathe and concentrate on the beginning of this chapter!

KateVery smart girl! Jumping on Edward...if only I could...

*mental pictures of me jumping on Edward run through my mind*

Hee hee.

And now, *cue scary movie music* Edward lost!

Aah, I can't take it anymore! *sprints off to next chapter*

amoredward chapter 6 . 9/3/2007
Love it!

I like philosophy! I want to be in that room with Carlisle and Jasper! I see it going something like this:

Me:(after hours of discussion) Is it getting hot in here, or is it just you guys?

Carlisle and Jasper: *silence* ... *leave*

Me: I just knew it...

He he. Okay, so it wasn't that funny. It worked out better in my head.

Yay! I'm going to read more! *jumps in cheer*

amoredward chapter 5 . 9/3/2007
Oh, Edward! Come on, boy! Don't let that happen again!

That's what he gets for being arrogant...
amoredward chapter 3 . 9/3/2007
Love love love it!

*runs off to next chapter*

amoredward chapter 2 . 9/3/2007
Oh. My. Gosh. This is so funny!

It is a good thing that I wasn't drinking anything while I read this chapter, because my computer would be ruined if I had! I can't even begin to describe how much I was cracking up. My face seriously hurts now! And I can't stop smiling-if not laughing!

There were so many parts that were just so so funny, that I couldn't quote them all in one review. But really, this was hysterical! Everyone was just so funny, that I'm starting to break up again just thinking about it!

Well, I'm off to read the next chapter!

fairymom chapter 11 . 9/1/2007
I cant believe this hasn't received more reviews. I loved it. After reading Eclipse, this is exactly how I pictured Edwards time w/the Denali clan. That is why he is reluctant in telling Bella the story, he was tempted but not in love.
BoysInBooksAreBetter chapter 5 . 8/2/2007
wow thos a great story, and I'm only up to chpt 5

It deserves more reviews.

"In the meantime, however, Emmett had great fun playing with his food when the sedative finally wore off." Thats so cool!

The Midnights Sun chapter 11 . 7/23/2007


TurningFromTrueBeauty chapter 11 . 7/16/2007
This story is brilliant! Really really well written. I haven't read such a good pretwilight story! I'm glad you have a sequel! Anyway, like I said, very good story
SaoirseAngel chapter 11 . 7/16/2007
I loved this story! You are now one of my absolute favorite authors.

One thing I've noticed about a lot of Twilight fics is that Edward never seems like Edward, something is always off about him but in this he's perfect. His reactions, his reasonings were all things I could totally see him doing. The sisters were also very well written. I'm really surprised that there aren't more reviews for this. Wonderful story!
burningpassions7 chapter 11 . 7/15/2007
this is amazing stuff! are you sure you're not stephanie meyer herself?
SpottedLilly chapter 11 . 7/14/2007
Intresting, and from me that's a complement.
californiaaaa chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
*Gasps* You have a ff account now?(retorical question 'cause obviously you do.) I was doing a random search and this story came up. Before you think I'm insane I'm ShootTheWounded over on Yay, now I can go put

"Overnighter" on my alert list so I don't have to compulsively check ramblings and thoughts for updates! Anywhoo, love your stories!
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