Reviews for Battlefields
FloatingPizza chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
Really quite excellent.
skywalker05 chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
Excellent. The prose is smooth and the metaphor powerful. It's so cool that you got such a thing out of the dichotomy in Vader...I really like "a new old hope". One critique: You say "both sides are too tired and too hurting to carry on", which is very poignant, but then "the outnumbered and overmatched forces of the Light try to find the strength to continue..." I'd like an illustration of the Dark having trouble too if you stay consistent with "both sides" struggling as in the earlier line. Very good story, very interesting way to illustrate Vader's character. The fact that the reader isn't sure what's going on untill the end, but is pulled right in anyway...I like this more the more I think about it.
Sexy Scottish Accent chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
DUDE! That was frickin' AWESOME! I loved it! A really big twist there, but beautifully done. I like Second-Last Herald-Mage, too. She's awesome, but SO ARE YOU!
jac16888 chapter 1 . 10/18/2007

Aria Saralyn chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
Wow . . . "Truth" and I inspired this? It's brilliant - I love it! Thanks for the PM and for the mention in your A/N.