Reviews for Literary
Guest chapter 9 . 11/16/2016
Did you call it "Lithium" for Li?
YuiSairenji chapter 12 . 5/22/2016
PLssss updateee!
amber-emeraldkisses chapter 12 . 1/30/2016
Hello there!
I can't believe how quickly I was sucked into this story-you are an amazing writer. I have been into the CCS fandom since I was in junior high school way back in the day and of course, my love for Sakura and Syaoran has never died. I have recently gotten back into fanfiction and well, I saw your story on the feed a few times and I wasn't so sure about it. But I am so glad I finally decided to take the plunge. This is so refreshing to read-creative and well thought out. You capitalize on the Sakura/Syaoran POV so well.
At first, I was put off by Sakura's OOCness but like you explained in your story, people change over the years and also due to certain circumstances in their lives. I know I am babbling, but I really love this story and I hope you continue!
I love how you incorporated the cards as well...too many stories leave the cards out all together which is sad because that is such a magical and wonderful part of the series.

One thing...and maybe this because I love Sakura and Syaoran together too much. But I see that you put this under the genre of romance, and I feel like it lacks a bit of romance. I would love a couple of scenes of Syaoran protecting Sakura or some kind of cute moments between them if that is possible :) Also it seems like they will figure out who each other is pretty soon? I feel like the story has strayed a bit from the original premise. But that is totally okay as I know that can happen with stories.

Anyway, love this story and please please please continue!
L0veME4eva chapter 12 . 11/30/2015
Wow! This story is so exciting, cant wait for more!
Guest chapter 2 . 6/29/2015
I feel so bad for sakura...
Ai Sakura chapter 12 . 6/8/2015
Where is ur update, love? D: what is going To happen? Please update! I love the story and everything
Rosen chapter 2 . 2/16/2015
It's 11:49PM here in the PH, and I can't stop reading your work! I actually need to sleep but I really want to continue reading your work aaargh. :c

Hope you can continue this story!
mrs. zala chapter 12 . 2/5/2015
OH MY GOD! YOU LEFT ME IN THE SUSPENSE!

WHAAAAT?!
you should continue this!
please! please! pretty please!
TvT

good luck! this is getting good!
damn. i love the new enemies. it's like CCS start all over again. WOP!

XD

until next time,

mrs. zala
mrs. zala chapter 9 . 2/4/2015
before i say continue, i wanna say sorry for what i write as a review for the previous 2 chapters. i wanna tell you, that's because i am blunt. and that's... what my true feelings at that time.

i hope you don't mind.

and now...

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
*screaming*

WHY YOU SAID YOU KINDA DIDN'T LIKE THE FLUFF?
THAT IS AWESOME! I REALLY LOVE THE AWKWARDNESS! THAT'S NOT CLICHE AND PROPER ANS STILL IN A PORTION SO IT LOOKS NATURAL!
i mean their reaponse towards each other...

KYAAAAAAAA

okay. moving on

until next time,

mrs. zala
mrs. zala chapter 8 . 2/4/2015
i...have mixed feelings about this chapter.
so... let me do this first.

*cry*

until next time,

mrs. zala
mrs. zala chapter 7 . 2/4/2015
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mrs. zala chapter 6 . 2/4/2015
woooooot?
MAGIC? EVEN BETTER!
KEEP GOING ON!
*turn to the next page*

XD

until next time,

mrs. zala
mrs. zala chapter 5 . 2/4/2015
*glup*
i am trembling right now.
what will happened next?

AND! I LOVE THE WAY YOU THINKING.
i already consider to ask you making the fanfiction story 'matchmaker' and 'DoY' as well! XD

until next time,

mrs. zala
mrs. zala chapter 3 . 2/4/2015
wow. just wow.
make sense now of all my questions since the beginning. i do understand the change.

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really sad. damn. what will happened on saturday?
i have a baaaaad feeling about this.

until next time,

mrs. zala
mrs. zala chapter 2 . 2/4/2015
ooooooooommmgggg!
i thought it was weird because sakura is kind of OOC (with all the curses hahaha), even though the story IS interesting...

but it turns out... IT IS MORE THAN THAT!
*prepare*
now move to next chapter!

(from now on.. you will see me around hehe. it's nice to know you )

until next time,

mrs. zala
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