Wow...just wow, words cannot describe how gripping that was. To be honest, I was a bit scared of Azure Kite; it's like he went from being somewhat apathetic to cruel as the story progressed.

Wow. Just... wow. Just so incredibly creepy and deep, exactly the way I'd imagine the Azure Knights finding Haseo would be like. I do agree with the other reviewers that just sticking in some AK/Haseo rape would seriously destroy the flow you'd built up. Excellent oneshot.

Lovely )

wow

strange, but at the same time, a very good fic

interesting, and well written, It caught completely my attention though my first thought was "kitexhaseo? must read o.o " xDD [I've seen lots of fan arts u]

I loved that of haseo's blood in Kite's lips .. kite eyes are the face of insanity. really

so, I think that's all

congratz, I loved the fic

bye bye (*)

Bo: gahh! wish it wasn't a oneshot.

Ski: me two... it would have been a cool multi-chapter story. But oh well. Great oneshot anywho! XD

Definitely different; I liked it.

It got a bit confusing as to what exactly was going on towards the end of the Azure Knights scene, but overall it was good.

I agree with other reviews - the personalities you've created are intriguing and fun to picture. Interesting concept all together.

Overall, original and well written. I enjoyed it.

Hm. Wow. This fic really leaves you thinking. It felt very... abstract, would you say? Maybe that was your intention.

I have to say, when I saw the rating, I really was expecting rape or something worse than this but, I think, that would've ruined the entire effect of it all.

I wish I could offer some concrit, but all I can really give you is that you made a few typos here and there. I noticed that you mispelled rogue as rouge two or three times. Maybe a quick readover to correct those if you really want to? It's nothing big, really.

Anywho... it's nice to see a well-written dark fic once in a while, and I must say, I really enjoyed reading this.

Wow, just wow. That was really well done and I was really drawn into the story. It strange how Azure Kite kept telling Haseo 'the wrong way'.

M, very nice! I love your descriptions, drew me in to the story and I couldn't stop reading til the end!

...Whoa... That was... something strange. I feel bad for poor Haseo... Geez, I would hate hacing something like that happen to me... That's why nobody likes the Azure Knights...

Great job though!

Ah maybe hopefully Skeith saved him in time...Why didn't Haseo just change into Skeith then attack them off of him?. Maybe he was Too emotional then but yeah Azure Kite dark love for Haseo might make Ovan a.k.a. the real Tri-Edge Jealous. *Points to ware Ovan tore AK apart in Vol.2 of G.U.* I thought Azure Kite was going to Rape him but who knows maybe Haseo might of enjoyed it. but yeah this Fic is Dark and getting time to get use to but...DO keep up The good work okay?.

Okay, I am seriously creeped out now, but in a good way.

Fantastic! I've always wanted an Azure Kite/Haseo fic..But I've been to lazy to right one. ; Anyhoo, I loved each of the Azures personalities, poor Haseo~ 5/5