Reviews for Two and One
Yami no Tsuki chapter 5 . 11/1/2014
Also, ooh yay! My vote would have been for romance _
This is coooool, maybe not AMAZINGASDFGHJKL level, but definitely worth reading. I appreciate the lack of mistakes, too. So rare.
Except for a ton of typos near the end of this chapter .

So good job! :D
Yami no Tsuki chapter 4 . 11/1/2014
Kami means deity, god, etc, as in a noun. The Japanese for 'God' is Kami-sama.
(You could just say god, though. The word translates directly to English.)
Yami no Tsuki chapter 3 . 10/31/2014
Cauldron would be 'ko—rudoron' but as far as I can tell the rest is right _
lifelovelaugh chapter 5 . 5/1/2014
You choice easy names to remember so I kept track fairly easy hope to find more chapters soon it was pretty awesome :D
A great story chapter 5 . 3/8/2014
Hello? Mr. Author, it has been YEARS since you have last updated the story. Please update soon!
sidus.frigus chapter 5 . 7/6/2013
Really amazing, not cliched like most. The summary was good and i like how you added they would have help keeping track of the evils. The fact you distrubited the jobs and added the other main characters from the Narutoverse, i applaud you on that. Amazing so far, cant wait for the update!
Yuki-kyo-kira chapter 5 . 6/16/2013
This is really good so far! But I see that you have not updated it in over 5 years! Hope you post more soon!
Theia Pallas chapter 5 . 11/20/2012
Please update! They haven't even got to Hogwarts yet! Please! XDD abik.
Shouta Izukai chapter 5 . 9/23/2012
Please update soon!
saofan3064 chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
I like your story, but I find it hard to believe that the ANBU taicho would pass Sasuke over Naruto. This being said I'm saying this because ANBU is not some company where the top can decide its successor. You said yourself that if the taicho dies then the SIC takes the position that would be Sasuke, but since all ANBU answer to the hokage really it would have been Tsunade's decision to pass over Sasuke. Otherwise your story is fine.
TheMasked-Trickster chapter 5 . 11/3/2011
SQUEEEEEEEEE! neh neh, maybe some brotherly love kibanaru to make Sasuke jealous? But...Are you still doing this? TT_TT If not I'll sik my virtual demon on you!
Janica Bunny chapter 5 . 10/12/2011
Ahh... well all that I can say for certain is that this is definitely interesting!

Also that the characters are OC. Not too much but it's definitely a very noticeable OCness.

I do hope though that you will update soon. I would like to read more and see what you do with this ficcie. :)

One LAST thing to note. Get a beta reader.

you have several several several spelling and grammar mistakes that could easily be avoided if it were simply proofread. :)
KuroChaos01 chapter 5 . 6/6/2011
Wow this story is really really really really really good. For some reason ive been obsessed with harry Potter Naruto Xover fics. but there are not many that are finished and most havent been updated in FOREVER. I know it has been a while but PLEASE update, it will be a shame to let a good story go to waste. x
c7bi-kyuubi chapter 5 . 11/30/2010
Ugh nooo! I can't believe it ends here... Please update, I'm sitting on the edge of my chair in anticipation. ~RaWR~
c7bi-kyuubi chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
Just the first chappy and I know this is going to be an awesome fic. Nice plot layout, there's just so many possibilities that you could whip out. Nice going, keep up the good work! I'm adding you to my alert list.
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