Reviews for Bliss
Slayerette89 chapter 1 . 12/23/2015
Given I've always hated Brooke in general and the way she behaved towards Peyton during the BLP triangle in particular, I loved observing LP bliss through her jealous eyes. (So much so I even forgot I prefer LP together, but unwed and childless. It's just that free-spirited, artistic couple exploring themselves, each other and the world without conventional family ties is my cliché of choice.) Great choice of perspective to write from. Great writing style.
LPB chapter 6 . 12/22/2014
When did he pick Brooke over her? She left him when he said he wants everything with her, she gave him up for Brooke she admitted to Ellie. I think when given the choice, Luke always chose Peyton over her. The times he went to her, opened up when Brooke begged for him to open up. Another way to tell brucas were never meant to be.
uhhh chapter 30 . 9/2/2014
So did Peyton finally give the go ahead for new baby? Perfect time
leo chapter 28 . 8/18/2014
No you are thinking too much for deep meaning Mark thinks angst drama means ppl/viewers tune in. I actually think Mark is more a Peyton. He is her fave.
joanyc chapter 36 . 6/15/2014
This made me sad. I hate to say but worse things than teen reading Rom com smut. I still wish you would finish the story and the anni/linds am I right she could be behind the paps? Your writing was beautiful and felt like it was a show. I have my l.p./oth interest but I am just rewatching s6 maybe you can come back in a few years or create a site for fans... don't let one voice ruin it all ppl just lie too
Marieh572 chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
i really really want you to finish this story as i would love to see how it ends i have read it like 20 times xoxo
Pegasus777 chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
I understand it's a long time since you last updated this, so I don't know if you will see this ever...but here goes...

This story is a work of art. Seriously. Beautiful writing. The way you portray Brooke as a jealous individual actually fits in really well, because in spite of all she said about her being over Lucas, I couldn't help but think she actually wasn't. I love the way you made sense of the 'Sorry's after Brooke walked in on them. That never struck me!
Point I'm trying to make is, throughout the first four seasons, Brooke was immature and ignorant. New York(or wherever she stayed) really changed her. She grew up, and became someone I always imagined Peyton being.
But then, season 5 and onwards, OTH started going pathetically downhill, so I refuse to comment on that.

For some reason, I don't like M-rated stuff, but I loved this.

Don't pay attention to the Brucas fans trying to caps-lock you to death. Their comments say more about them than they do about this story.

Also, seeing as I'm not a native English speaker, I am sorry if my language has faults...

By far the best Leyton fanfic I've ever read.
Marieh572 chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
I reli reli want u to finish this story because there are very few writers who would write these kind of stories i absolutley love it
Guest chapter 29 . 5/6/2013
LOL, but you could have done the next best thing and had Peyton knee that bastard, Dan.
Guest chapter 26 . 5/6/2013
Brooke's denial is actually kinda fascinating.
oncetreehill chapter 25 . 5/6/2013
O good god, i just read a few of the reviewers and they totally proved my earlier point. Are they like twelve of something. Why the hell would you read a Leyton story if you hate it with such juvenile passion. I'm actually LMAO. And good job on the hot sex scenes. I'm truly tickled by how much these guys are nearly porning with pda without a care in the world. Good on ya Leyton. Sex god and goddess.
oncetreehill chapter 24 . 5/6/2013
I'm so glad Lucas heard this exchange. Seems like Peyton can't say anything without Brooke getting defensive or aggressive. Thing is I actually want Peyton and Brooke to get along once again because in the actual show, I loved their relationship. It's the shipping fandom that was off putting, but there were plenty of us who loved Breyton too. Hope eventually Brooke will get her head out of her denial and find someone who will love her, otherwise, she'll fixate on Lucas forever and there's no way to save their friendship in that instance.
oncetreehill chapter 19 . 5/6/2013
about your A/N: You're so right. I saw and felt a distinct and deliberate move to write the Peyton character poorly while giving everyone else, even the minor characters lots of character development. Especially in light of the fact the head honchos even said they felt the character had run it's coarse towards the end there. I mean, you take a character with loads of still untapped potential given such interesting characteristics and you can't think of anything. Lame and Shame or just plain lazy.
oncetreehill chapter 17 . 5/6/2013
I'm really enjoying your story. But come on, am I the only one that remembers Peyton got pretty god at that boxing stuff Derek insisted she take up. Peyton could so easily have slugged that drunken creep all on her own and stood over the loser looking damn sexy in her stiletto heals. The girl ain't no damsel with just a pretty face. But aside from that, it's a entertaining story.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
UM to the immature and ridiculous Brucas fan here...please go read something labelled 'Brooke and Lucas'...because this is a leyton story. Written for leyton shippers. I have many things going through my mind about you, but I'd rather not say much, because I'm better than you. Just like the fandom is. We don't go read brucas fics and bash it. So please, go back to where you belong- in trashville. I honestly can't believe people like you exist. Don't like it? Move on to the next story and handle it like a normal decent human being. You are pathetic.
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